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WhiteWingeDove
2007-11-11
ch 3,
abuse"...maybe we can be friends."

Aw, that was so sad! But I loved it anyways. Did you ever write a sequel to this, or am I going to have to use my imagination as to what might have happened?

Anyways, good job. Loved it!
grissom07
2007-08-11
ch 3,
abuseomg i loved this story
Amanda Hawthorn
2007-08-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseI remember this now and it's still great
CSIShipperGirl
2004-02-23
ch 3,
abuseWow! All I have to say about that is... wow! Well that is not really all... I really like G/S fics where Griss is the one to do the chasing. This one just hit the spot. I honestly hope you are good to your word about writing a sequel because it would be one that I would definately enjoy reading. Keep writing I look forward to seeing your next fic.
CSISG
Burked
2003-10-02
ch 3,
abuseI loved that you went another direction from the expected ending. I've often threatened to do that, but never seem to be able to!

Loved the story; loved the writing.

Even though I liked the unusual ending, I wouldn't be opposed to a sequel! Is it ready yet? No? What are you waiting for?
luxor
2003-09-30
ch 3,
abuseWow. Powerful. What a great story but how can their signals be THAT crossed? I do like that Grissom is the one "confused" here at the end ... and I would like to see how he wins back her trust. I have a feeling that it will be as emotional as this story was. Please continue and thanks for sharing.
Cindy aka SG1PhileShipper
2003-09-30
ch 3,
abuseThat was one wonderful piece of fic. The ending was a little sad, but I think it was just perfect. If I were Sara, I wouldn't forgive Gris easily either. Not after all he put her through. No that he is ready, she isn't anymore. Could be an interesting point for a sequel. Pretty please. Would love to see Gris fight to get Sara back.
Aria
2003-09-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseThat was really a wonderful story! I'm glad that
you didn't have Sara just 'forgive and forget' all that Grissom's put her through. I do hope that you'll be posting a sequel soon though, because I'd love to see how you have Grissom try to win back Sara's trust. I think it serves him right that Sara should shut him out - gives him a taste of his own medicine. Great job! Well-written and a fabulous read!
Elory
2003-09-29
ch 3, anon.
abusePlease don't take this the wrong way but I'm really not thrilled with how it ended either.

That's not to say I didn't love it, I did. But *sigh* I really wanted more. Powerful writing Manigault, you really drew me in to the pain they were both feeling.

I am waiting on baited breath to see what happens next. You HAVE to write a sequel.
Rory
2003-09-29
ch 2, anon.
abuseI love this story! Please write more!
And Also With You
2003-09-29
ch 3,
abuseUgh!! That was exceptional!! (and as an aside--damn right you're writing a sequel!) I love that you're not making it easy (as the show would never make it easy). Make him work for it--right on. I can never write that 'enjoyable' angst. But I so enjoy reading it. Really looking forward to the sequel. P.S. the bit about the germs was very cute. tee hee.
Linda
2003-09-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseOMG!! you HAVE to write a sequel for this! you can't just leave it hanging like that! its killing me!
Buzzy
2003-09-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseIs it really finished? Man, what a cliffhanger! Very well written, nice way to have Grissom make movements towards being a social creature.
Barb8
2003-09-29
ch 3,
abuseOh man I hope you are planning a follow up story for this. I hate having it end like this, I hope that Grissom finally earns Sara's trust and affection again. Please do a happy follow up.
g/sfan
2003-09-29
ch 2, anon.
abuseYou've described the caracters rather well and it makes the story that much better. Hoping this will be a long fic :-)
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