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| WhiteWingeDove 2007-11-11 ch 3, | abuse"...maybe we can be friends." Aw, that was so sad! But I loved it anyways. Did you ever write a sequel to this, or am I going to have to use my imagination as to what might have happened? Anyways, good job. Loved it! |
| grissom07 2007-08-11 ch 3, | abuseomg i loved this story |
| Amanda Hawthorn 2007-08-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseI remember this now and it's still great |
| CSIShipperGirl 2004-02-23 ch 3, | abuseWow! All I have to say about that is... wow! Well that is not really all... I really like G/S fics where Griss is the one to do the chasing. This one just hit the spot. I honestly hope you are good to your word about writing a sequel because it would be one that I would definately enjoy reading. Keep writing I look forward to seeing your next fic. CSISG |
| Burked 2003-10-02 ch 3, | abuseI loved that you went another direction from the expected ending. I've often threatened to do that, but never seem to be able to! Loved the story; loved the writing. Even though I liked the unusual ending, I wouldn't be opposed to a sequel! Is it ready yet? No? What are you waiting for? |
| luxor 2003-09-30 ch 3, | abuseWow. Powerful. What a great story but how can their signals be THAT crossed? I do like that Grissom is the one "confused" here at the end ... and I would like to see how he wins back her trust. I have a feeling that it will be as emotional as this story was. Please continue and thanks for sharing. |
| Cindy aka SG1PhileShipper 2003-09-30 ch 3, | abuseThat was one wonderful piece of fic. The ending was a little sad, but I think it was just perfect. If I were Sara, I wouldn't forgive Gris easily either. Not after all he put her through. No that he is ready, she isn't anymore. Could be an interesting point for a sequel. Pretty please. Would love to see Gris fight to get Sara back. |
| Aria 2003-09-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseThat was really a wonderful story! I'm glad that you didn't have Sara just 'forgive and forget' all that Grissom's put her through. I do hope that you'll be posting a sequel soon though, because I'd love to see how you have Grissom try to win back Sara's trust. I think it serves him right that Sara should shut him out - gives him a taste of his own medicine. Great job! Well-written and a fabulous read! |
| Elory 2003-09-29 ch 3, anon. | abusePlease don't take this the wrong way but I'm really not thrilled with how it ended either. That's not to say I didn't love it, I did. But *sigh* I really wanted more. Powerful writing Manigault, you really drew me in to the pain they were both feeling. I am waiting on baited breath to see what happens next. You HAVE to write a sequel. |
| Rory 2003-09-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love this story! Please write more! |
| And Also With You 2003-09-29 ch 3, | abuseUgh!! That was exceptional!! (and as an aside--damn right you're writing a sequel!) I love that you're not making it easy (as the show would never make it easy). Make him work for it--right on. I can never write that 'enjoyable' angst. But I so enjoy reading it. Really looking forward to the sequel. P.S. the bit about the germs was very cute. tee hee. |
| Linda 2003-09-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG!! you HAVE to write a sequel for this! you can't just leave it hanging like that! its killing me! |
| Buzzy 2003-09-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseIs it really finished? Man, what a cliffhanger! Very well written, nice way to have Grissom make movements towards being a social creature. |
| Barb8 2003-09-29 ch 3, | abuseOh man I hope you are planning a follow up story for this. I hate having it end like this, I hope that Grissom finally earns Sara's trust and affection again. Please do a happy follow up. |
| g/sfan 2003-09-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou've described the caracters rather well and it makes the story that much better. Hoping this will be a long fic :-) |