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Reviews For: Signal in the Sky

AimeeBurt
2007-08-29
ch 25,
abuseI love your story there arent enough thundercats stories I cant wait to read more!!
Spacehog26
2006-10-25
ch 2,
abuseHey, only read the first couple of chapters so far, but thought you could do with a bolster to your review count. This is really well written, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Great stuff!
Agent-G
2006-05-19
ch 20,
abuseWell I'm glad you finally got around to writing this story again I was hoping you'd stop with the vehicle voltron stuff and get back to this. For a moment I thought I might not remember enough to still follow along but thankfully that didn't seem to be the case.

Although you might want to give them a breather now and then I mean giving them all this stuff is getting a little too much angst into the story. You want to have some nice things happen now and then maybe some calmer moments. You don't want to over due it with all the action/drama/angst do you?

Trust me keeping a story going at 100 mph only hurts it. Oh and try not to make super huge paragraphs like in that first part it gets a little hard to read sometimes.

But over all a nice chapter and I see you're leading up to getting the other 3 thundercats back in here. Plus will we ever see more of that Panthro and I think Willow thing you hinted at? I've been dying to see more of that.
Agent-G
2005-05-25
ch 19,
abuseNice to see that it worked this time and that was a very nice explanation of his fears I hate it when they never go into things like that in the show.

I doubt you'd just kill off one of them just like that so I'm just wondering how he survives.
Lagaz
2005-05-22
ch 19,
abusePurrsia, What a great story! I hope that Tygra isn't written off yet, especially since Cheetara and Tygra are finally getting a sense of normalcy. I like Felina's character, she seems to balance Lion-O's impetuousness. And the thing with Nadya (Willa's sister) and Panthro..hmm that could be interesting. I hope you continue with your story. I really enjoyed it.
Keep it up!
purrsiakat
2004-12-20
ch 18, anon.
abuseThanks for your comments, Agent-G
Jax isn't written off yet, and yeah his life does kinda suck :-p But he'll be back in the story soon enough.
The next chapter is going to explore what the real deal is with Tygra and swimming!

As for the comics, yes I did collect and read them. Sounds like you're referring to The Return mini, which used the backdrop of recolonizing New Thundera (which the show actually dealt with) as the setting for a darker tale. I liked them well enough ^_^
Agent-G
2004-12-20
ch 18,
abuseYou know I'm really glad I placed you on my author alert list. I was wondering when you would be getting back to Jax, althoughhis life really sucks I hope he gets back to the Thundercats.

Have you seen those Thundecat comics? They show what happen after the show and even in the future with a thundercat city built around the Lair with all the surviving Thundarians that were scattered making the place their home.
purrsiakat
2004-12-07
ch 17, anon.
abuseTo answer your questions, Claws, first of all yes, I do have the next chapter nearly done (I know I'm slow lol). The most recent setback has been homeschooling my son which has taken up a lot more time than I'd anticipated. Anyway...about the rest of your questions:

2) Is the Seer in the first chapter the same person that Lion-o visits about getting the Sword fixed? (don't ask which episode, was not a regular watcher at the time)

If you're talking about in the Prologue, that's the Guardian of the Book of Omens, who was featured in later season two episodes.

3) Why didn't the Cats look for Jax? Did they just figure that he was perfectly fine in the hands of those incompetent oafs who sent him to Hefesets' living corpse at the first chance?

Well the first time they tried a rescue (and to get Panthro as well) it didn't turn out so well and Bela got killed as a result. I suppose too much had been happening to them afterward to try again. Maybe I have to go back and re-read the last few chapters (one disadvantage of writing over a period of years - my own memory gets hazy!) to be sure, but I also don't think the cats knew Jax was sent to Mumm-Ra, just that they couldn't detect him at the Castle anymore.

4)Did Mumm-ra somehow send Jax back in time or did the General and his wife just notice a few days or hours before he returned? Unless of course Mutants steriotypically have an easier time at, say, long-term reconnaissance, at birth than most well-trained soldiers don't have even by the time of death?

Jax was merely sent back to present day Plundarr. Of course, V-man probably thinks the kid got fried lol
Anyway, the next chapter mostly deals with Jax on Plundarr so a lot of things will become more clear soon.

Thanks for your interest and for reading.

--Purrsia
Claws2
2004-12-06
ch 17,
abuseFew things:

1) Do you nearly have the next chapter close to at least halfway done (no disrespect, of course. more hope)

2) Is the Seer in the first chapter the same person that Lion-o visits about getting the Sword fixed? (don't ask which episode, was not a regular watcher at the time)

3) Why didn't the Cats look for Jax? Did they just figure that he was perfectly fine in the hands of those incompetent oafs who sent him to Hefesets' living corpse at the first chance?

4)Did Mumm-ra somehow send Jax back in time or did the General and his wife just notice a few days or hours before he returned? Unless of course Mutants steriotypically have an easier time at, say, long-term reconnaissance, at birth than most well-trained soldiers don't have even by the time of death?
Purrsia
2004-05-01
ch 17,
abuseFirst, thanks for reading and for the kind comments :)
To answer Agent-G's question, yes I do plan to bring the 'new' ThunderCats in later (probably not until the second or even third 'era', so it's a way off yet). However, adding Snarfer and the Lunataks is still up in the air. There's already so much going on in the story, I don't want to overload it with even more characters...especially characters I never liked much in the first place!
As for spacing, I purposefully take out the tags that make it double space - it looks weird to me that way and often other aspects of the formatting are messed up as a result. Besides, books aren't generally double spaced...maybe try increasing the font size or printing it out?
Agent-G
2004-04-07
ch 17,
abuseWell I've been enjoying this story, sorry that I haven't reviewed up until now though. I look forward to new chapters.
A few things before I stop writting though. You really should put spaces between the paragraghs, it really makes it easier to read though it.
Also will you be getting around to bringing in the other three thundercats that were brought in later in the series, I know you mentioned them, but I really want to see them soon.
RainbowBrite76
2003-12-07
ch 17,
abuseawesome. and very moving. it by far the best fanfiction i have every read in my entire life. you have a great talent. the chapters kept we rapt in attion and i couldn;t stop until it was done. a masterpiece among fanfics!
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