Ah that was cool, funny in parts, depressing, and you know heart warming! Plus you kept it grounded...I kept expecting some big like revelation where things get even more supernatural but you kept it in line which I think made it work so much for the better. The bits where Takao follows Kai (and from Kai's POV on that as well), Max &Kai talking and That last chapter; the last scene with the Demo. boys and the last fight where everyone shows up & bitbeasts work together...was all excellent. Not to mention the arguments you made made perfect sense...Basically there aren't enough ways to say how awesome this was..breaking up and comin back together are just a theme I like, when its done right of course! This was deffo done right! Thanks alot, I enjoyed this.

...you do know that the names of the beyblade are named after the bitbeast?and they just somehow know what to call them before they get it too.

cool!

faves!

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Wai! Beautifully done! I truly enjoyed this story from the first sentence to the last. Thanks for the entertainment! _ *gives you a cookie*

Thats awesome like all of your other fics! I so loved everything!

Hi! This was a very nice story. I just loved it. The BladeBreakers always seem to go throughb hard times, and break up during those times. I mean like just look at what happened in 'Beyblade G-Revolution'. I happen to know that the BladeBreakers arugue alot with each other, having their ocassional disagreements and stuff. But one way or another, they always seem to get back together as a team in the end. Like in your story. You're story could still do with a teeny bit of editing, but all in all, it was ja great piece of work. Well, Cya! _

a sudden and abrupt ending, but i liked it! _

THIS IS DA BEST U MUST MAKE A SEQUEL!

I love your story it was so angsty, really got me riled up. I was following the story so much i thought i was in it.
Sooty Cat
please finish it

Wow! This story is absolutely amazing! I really wasn't expecting Max's dad to get shot.
!_! Poor Max! I really liked the ending! YAY! They all came back together! The story gives an optimistic feeling at the end and all of those quotes worked really well with your story! I added 'Boys don't cry' to my favourite story list! _

yuriko: ;_; so touching! is this the last chapter?
yurika: ...it was very good! *nods knowingly*
yuriko:

Yay! What a wonderful ending to a fantastic story.
Cool battle ... everyone was there and, of course, the 'Breakers won, but the battle was still awesome, the way they fought like a team, truly back together again.
Hm ... loose ends, i like that, leaves things up to the imagination. I love how you left that last scene to the Demo Boys, letting us know that they are more than just tools now for Biovolt and Voltaire, sealing away the evil bit-beasts and all. That was cool.
Again, fantastic eding, i enjoyed not only this chapter but the whole story, it was a thoroughly entertaining and engaging read.
Laters,
Vialana

OMG! that was the coolest ending eva! It was a bit fast when u described how they overcame the D-boys. but it was a very good ending. Loose ends give you something to think about and i think that you did a good job! Make another story soon! *wink wink nudge nudge* lol, cya!
-Tenma Koneko
Ps. i just updated Sweet Revenge.

I assume this is the end?
This a good story, I'm glad Neoborg got rid of those weird bitbeats. I knew they weren't all that bad.
Hope to see anither story of you soon
Byez Mezu

nice end! it was really cool! thanks for taking the time to write this! it was good.