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JoytoDemFishies101
2008-07-05
ch 8,
abuseI really like your story, i hope the next chapter comes out SOON!
wolves-song
2008-06-17
ch 1,
abusegood so far i'll review in detail when i finish
Eine Kleine Katze
2008-06-13
ch 1,
abuseOh my... I can't believe you're just going to end it like this! We'll never know what happened to Jareth and Sarah!!
Have you ever considered letting anyone pick it up for you? Give me a PM if you are interested.
Either way... thankyou for posting this beautifully written fanfic, the whole series has been a joy to read though I'm so sad to see that it will never be continued. (I'll cross my fingers and put it on alert just in case.) You really do have a gift, and a beautiful way with words. Once again your characterisation has been completely spot on- you bring your characters to life- both Henson's and the OCs. I could ramble all day about how engaging you writing style is...
I wish you best of luck with you writing and whatever else you choose to pursue.
Thanks again,
EKK
vamp1987
2008-05-27
ch 8,
abuseIt's sad that you ended this one. I really wish I knew eachly where you were going with this. I hope you at some point find that magical place that will provide you with time, inspiration, and a willingness to reenter the magical realm that is The Labyrinth with its brutish king and obstinate princess. I'm going to still alert this to keep hope alive that the stroy will continue. Ok, back to reality space cadet. I really how you create interesting conflicts and plot twists to keep your audience guessing. You provide a single piece of information that opens up ten new questions to the reader. I would love if you would release a summation of sorts to possibly demonstrate the intended path of the story if you truly refuse to continue. I hate unresolved stories, but they seem to be the only type I am stumbling across lately. Tootles.
Heiress of the House of Moo...
2008-05-24
ch 8,
abuseNO!
You can't just.. END it there?!?!?!

I shall forever wait, hoping that you shall come back and continue. I WILL CONTINUE CHECKING! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!

But I understand that you can't :'( But I'll still check XD Just in case you ever decide to write a nother chapter, just for the heck of it...
Cherrysinger
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseWHAT? Who is this Roksana...what did he do with her. Gr. It makes me angry when I read that he was with another girl, because it sounds as if he really cared about her

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CM Daily
2008-02-11
ch 8, anon.
abuseKL,

I was thinking about this fic the other day. I read the entire thing, from the very beginning, and hung on every word (as I'm sure many have). Of all the fanfiction I've ever read, this is probably the only one that has stuck in my mind over a period of years. I understand your reasons (now better than ever) for putting these things on hold. I don't know if you'll read this, but...

I just wanted to say thank you for sharing such a beautiful collection of works with the world. It would be fantastic if one day they were completed, but often times it is the case that the best works are not. Thank you for giving people new dreams and new things to wonder over, new patterns and puzzles to intrigue and engage our minds. Thank you for opening up part of yourself to us, and I hope you meet with success in your future/current endeavors. You are a brilliant writer.

Sincerely,
CM
Auriga
2008-01-27
ch 6, anon.
abuseCH 6 "The woman who spills blood to turn the sun." - is this the legend/myth of Linda? I can't quite figure out the origin of this myth. :)Hm...
Helena Darjeeling
2008-01-08
ch 8,
abuseOh, how I crave resolution. This story has (had, I suppose) so much promise; a welcome shift from, "hey, look, the Goblin King is my BF and he sleeps in my dorm in my extra-long twin bed!" (okay, not a direct quote). I like Roksana and Athan, too; interesting characters. Of course I'll never be able to cajole you out of retirement, but I do want you to know that, should the inclination to revisit this website ever strike you, I had such a blast reading these stories and I am sad to see them end.

Best,
Helena D.
Lady Vengeance
2008-01-02
ch 8,
abuseHi, I've just read both of your Labyrinth fanfics, and I was left awe-stuck. Kudos to you, they were absolutely beautiful.
Erika Darkmoon
2007-12-10
ch 8,
abuseAck! This is so good! ^^ Hopefully you update soon!
connor
2007-12-02
ch 8, anon.
abuseK.L.-

Just wanted you to know I still loved this story, and AFOD, even if they are never to be finished. I was there when you were writing AFOD, and that was too long ago to even contemplate. Got the urge to check up on you and see if there had been any changes...and of course, saw the new Bio. I don't know when you posted that, but I understand. Even if I am a triffle sad. :)

I hope you're doing well, and maybe we'll see you in paperback someday. I always did hate reading on a screen anyways. Either way, luck in whatever you do!
-Connor
Desert Willow
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abuseHey you,

Just wonder how goes it? How are you enjoying your travels? I sure miss the old boards sometimes since I've lost contact with so many people from the old fandom. Just wanted you to know you're in my thoughts.

DW
Re-o-ko
2007-11-11
ch 5,
abuseAll the way amazing!
LM22102
2007-09-12
ch 8,
abuseI'd like to ask, not for an update, as your hiatus is understandable. But if you've finished the story. Not in words, but in your heart, in your mind.

I have many of those. I will think hours worth of writing in a sitting from beginning to end. A complete story within my mind and not one word written.

I'd like to ask if this is the same for you. Did you write this on whims? Was it plotted out till the end? Vaguely detailed to the last word?

I'd love to speak to you on this.
My msn messenger:

I'll try to contact you on your other sites. I know you must be busy, life is hardly noted otherwise, and would understand if you'd rather not speak about the story, but I need to know that I at least tried.
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