More please? Its just like inventing a new drug, getting people addicted and then just stopping.

Once more I love this

This is so painfuly good! Please, more!! You are the ONLY one who has ever pulled a GREAT sequel to the Labyrinth. I don't want to be annoying and I hope you understand how good your work is.

I know you said you are no longer writting the ending of this, and I know I'm setting myself up for disappointment, but still I can hope that if I review enough you'll reconsider right? Your writting is too good.

Once again an excellent piece of work! (And also again I don't know if you still read comments or not, but I thought I'd give you a review any ways). I was a bit sad that there wasn't a final interaction with Jareth and Sarah before you let go of the story, but my imagination will have to suffice. I have to say that I like where you took the stories from the movie. They were grown up characters and a more mature labyrinth. You original characters are also very interesting. You by chance don't have an outline posted somewhere of what would have happened in the story, do you? I've seen some authors (and by some I mean one, but I thought it was a neat idea) do that when they stop working on a story. Anywhoo, great job and I hope you continue to write on your own because you are really talented.

Two typos I noticed:

"You just want to NOW my weakness." Now=know.

"One hand stretched out, TIRED to rub away some of the markings on her cheek." Tired=tried.

Though in "A Forfeit of Dreams", you're much worse about them...and formatting...my OCD almost kicked in and made me stop reading. Having gotten to the end of the series, I'm glad it didn't.

But seriously...if you ever want someone to proofread your work, come talk to me. I LOATHE typos...and no amount of FanFiction-updating-induced hassle will convince me to leave them alone. (In my own work, at least.)

I have to say, I am completely enchanted (befitting word) by your story. You took so much care to stretch it and plot it out. I can only imagine how much time and effort that must have took you. And I simply adore, your characters. You gave them so much life.

I left the rest of this comment in a private message on your livejournal page. I hope it reaches you.

Thank you for giving us such an excellent sequal to Labyrinth. It's wonderful, exciting, and it had my stomach in knots throughout. Even unfinished, it is probably one of my favorite stories of all the fandoms and I will read it many times in the future! Thank you Thank You Thank you for writing this!!

I do so hope you include a summation one day, or give us a peak at any other writing adventures you take. You're a wonderful writer!

Oh no!
After deep absorption in your lovely story on another page, I read your bio here only to discover that you have ensnared me with your story, my mind wrapped up in your passages, only to abandon me with our hero and heroine on separate planes and many truths to be revealed swirling like fish in murky water, just beneath my feet!
Oh...how could you be so cruel?
*sigh* I can't really rant wholeheartedly, as I have more than one unfinished fic awaiting my return...and I understand the demands of RL and the capricious nature of inspiration...but I fervently hope that you some day return and allow me to once again use more of my seat than just the edge. The rest of it will get lonely and my rear will get tired.

I just wanted to tell you that this was a wild ride. From the first story, I knew your style was something special. You created a new Labyrinth, beautiful and deadly, a sharp contrast to the original. Your Jareth was a tortured soul, not the dancing magic man of the movie. Sarah was a heroine, trapped by all that a heroine must do even when she hates it. This story obviously was preparing to take your world into an entirely different direction. I'm heartbroken that I won't have the opportunity to understand what Linda did to Sarah, though I have a feeling it was something a mother should never do to their child. I wonder if, when Jareth arrives, just how many years have past, and if he didn't leave a part of himself with Sarah to raise for all those years. Would Sarah be the bitter abandoned woman, the skeptical yearning heart, or would she be the one to remind Jareth of what they really had? I don't know, and it's very sad.

I wonder, if you do get this, and you're willing to share, I'd love to know what your outline was for this story. Even a sketchy outline would be better than what could possibly be nothing. Believe me, I know what its like to let go of a story, but I know also what it's like to read an abandoned work and want desperately to know what will happen. If you're willing to share you can email me at

Thank you for sharing your incredible imagination, style, and pen with us. You should definately consider writing professionally. I'd love to read anything original you come up with. Take care.

Soladara

I just completed AFOD almost a week ago, yet it took only the span of a single day to read this work. Before, seeing your message declaring your permanent hiatus, I decided to not read WDMC, fearing that I would grow to attached to a story that will never be finished. Sadly, as you can see, I did read it. It's depressing how you've left FF and your stories, but I wish you success in your future endeavors. Now, we'll never know what will become of Jareth and Sarah, Linda's mysterious background, and how long Jareth has left Sarah in the Aboveground. Your stories are the only stories on this site that I bother to go back and reread; I loved your portrayal of Jareth and Sarah, your descriptive settings, and the smoothness in how your stories progress. Plus, the way you tied Persephone and Hades to Aracelis and Athan was simply brilliant. I, and many others have truly enjoyed reading your wonderfully written stories. If only you would come back, even for a minuscule period...

I choose to review before ever reading this story, I want to tell you your writing is beautiful. I read your post of premenant hiatus, but it would seem everyone who has read your stories wishing other wise. It is wonderful to find a fanfic writer with writing tat draws you in, but is not to graphic. I really must ask that you rethink the idea of a hiatus if only because you can find inspiration from everywhere, if you only dare to look. Second because I am sure everyone who reviws this story would wait patiently for you to have time to write it. And thirdly desires change everyday, so dont throw away one desire because you dont think is suits you anymore. Pleasedont take my words as harsh in any way, I only wish to ask, no nay, beg of you to find writing you wonderful stories. If nothing else but to give it am ending. TO SIMPLY FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED.

I choose to review before ever reading this story, I want to tell you your writing is beautiful. I read your post of premenant hiatus, but it would seem everyone who has read your stories wishing other wise. It is wonderful to find a fanfic writer with writing tat draws you in, but is not to graphic. I really must ask that you rethink the idea of a hiatus if only because you can find inspiration from everywhere, if you only dare to look. Second because I am sure everyone who reviws this story would wait patiently for you to have time to write it. And thirdly desires change everyday, so dont throw away one desire because you dont think is suits you anymore. Pleasedont take my words as harsh in any way, I only wish to ask, no nay, beg of you to find writing you wonderful stories. If nothing else but to give it am ending. TO SIMPLY FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED.

oh, update soon! i'm literally hanging on your every word. PLEASE...

now ive read your profile and i know youve stopped writing but i think there r quite a few readers out there that share my sentiment.

this story (and the first one aswell) are one of THE best fanfics i ever read. and thats not just in the labyrinth section mind you.

i really think this story is worth completely.

so please, save our (labyrinth fans around the globe) our sanity and finish it!!

I know you've stopped fanficcing. But I swear by all things holy and Jareth that if you ever update this, I will create a shrine to you and make shitloads of fanart and anything you could possibly want. (That's possible for me, I mean.)

I am desparate, your stories are heavenly, and I'm high on caffiene, but I still mean it.