Please update! this is a really interesting story! does serena get drunk and end up pregnant to Darien!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow! Great chapter! PLease update. It would mean alot to us readers if you did. If you don't have the time to update...it's alright. we understand. But please try...even if we got really small chapters, i'm fine with that! I just LOVE this story...and you didn;t eve start it yet...that's gotta count for something!

I hope this review helped!

thx for reading this!

oh yeah...PLZ UPDATE!

you should update this, it was very interesting...

i really liked your fanfic. i really wanna know what happenes. please continue and i hope you update soon! _

I review only a few times when I see that its absolutely necessary...and this is one of those times...I think that you have a lead on a great fanfic...I have read a whole lot of fanfics and as a word of constructive criticism please dont make it overly complicated...a little goes a long way...but, so far I think its good...and I hope you update soon! (operative word in whole review: SOON)

That was good, you got me wondering what will happen that will make her life a living hell. I want to point out a few things that you couldve explained slightly more:

Fools, she thought. All oblivious to how much of an asshole he really is.

You explained that Darien spread rumors and all about her. I think you shouldve given examples of what he said. Also she says' all oblivious to how much of an asshole he was'. YOu shouldve written about girls drooling over him and all complimenting his every move to give readers the feel of how oblivious they were.

I have a question: What did you mean by teh final dance? Was it a prom or just a dance?

Also i think you should work on describing her surroundings more. For instance: her room, her house, her front yard, the graduation (was it in a gym or what?)

But besides that you have a good story that I insist should be continued.

P.S I have problems with updating a chapter. Do you or any of you readers know why I have problems and how can I fix it. IS there any way I can email ?

Bye

great story please update soon

Hey! Your prologue really paves the way for a rockin' story! I look forward to chapter 1!