| Reviews for Pepperment Tea |
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honeybiscut93 11/8/09 . chapter 1 interesting |
Mika Uriah 4/18/09 . chapter 1AW gushes! |
Nancyt 4/13/09 . chapter 1 Nice.. Please do more. |
Elfkid 4/5/06 . chapter 1I totally get the symbolism. Obviously short, but carries a wollop. |
Truest Tears 1/5/06 . chapter 1Yeah, nice. It had a soft, symbolic air to it I found very nice. Good Writing! -Truest Tears- |
Aceswild 1/3/04 . chapter 1Cute story. It almost read like a poem and that's what I liked about it! |
Lisa Paris 10/3/03 . chapter 1 Short and sweet, or should that be bittersweet? Love Ro/Remy - far more than Rogue/Remy. This is a very nice little piece. |
Sky Queen 10/2/03 . chapter 1 This is a very well written piece. I like it a lot, especially the symbolism. You are an extremely tallented writer, in fact I hope to pick up a few tips from you! But yeah, keep on writing!:) And can you pretty pretty please review some more of my stuff? You know you want to! Sky Queen |
E 9/30/03 . chapter 1 That was really good! Quick lil' story... loved it! Good characterization. Are you going to add anything more? Have this be an intro to a longer story? |
wahinetoa 9/28/03 . chapter 1I. love. you. For such a short period of work, you certainly caught my heart in a vice while "he watched her.." The angst! The unsaid! The watchin' and waiting, and not saying.. all perfectly said. Goddess. PLEASE ya gotta continue this. Heartbreaking. |
Darlin 9/28/03 . chapter 1I like this. It's short but very nice. I like the details you put in it - watching each drip of tea. The symbolism of the tea making/discarding was very nicely done. Hope to read more from you. |
summers2004 9/27/03 . chapter 1That was actually pretty good. I really love your style. Are you planning on writing more stories? You should. Anyway...I loved your story. Write another one soon! |
StorminBlacBlu 9/27/03 . chapter 1I thought this story is very cute and I have always liked Remy and Ororo's friendly relationship. *wishes it was more then friends* (LOL) Anyways this was a really cute story! |
WhiteVeils 9/27/03 . chapter 1This could be a really awesome scene without changing a word of it...because what you are trying to do really is nice. I think what you need is to go through very carefully, look at your punctuation, and redo the spacing of it so it isn't all bunched together in one paragraph. That would give time for each sentence to sink into the reader and let them absorb the symbolism. Just my thought. |
BJ 9/27/03 . chapter 1 Add me to that list too! |