the stroy kind of relates to the actually show but it was good. i liked how u detailed a lot of the parts. very well done^_^

Ahh! Chibi Pan-chan is so cute! I loved the whole thing with the clouds :D

I never noticed UUbu was from Namu's village. It makes perfect sense though (his reasons for wanting the money).

Veggie bit Goku's tail back in "Jingle Bells"? *sweatdrops* Heh, I'm the author and I don't even remember that part. ^_^;; I'll have to go find which chapter it's in later on.

The "immortality wish" fic was "Anything You Say".
The wish wasn't mentioned in the summary since at the time it was just the second wish Veggie got to make after making Son-kun his 'servant-maid'. *grins*.

I really liked this first chapter! Also glad you're feeling better. Being sick is a pain. I had a tooth-ache a while ago when my wisdom-teeth were coming in.

The cloud picture was so cool! We've been having a LOT of those clouds around here lately.

Can't wait for more! :D