Awesome! Please write more

Kill all the mini-vamps, Dragons! Wonderful chapter.

No! No killy the Dragon Lord! Still good^_^

He's a vampire?! was not expecting that. Awesome story!

Is...he...going...to...turture...poor...little...Rath? Still a good story. I'll probably fav it, but I only fav on the last written chapter because some stories start out good, but then gets bad (this is not ment as an insult, and I'm sorry if I offend you, but I wanted to explain why I have yet to fav a perfectly fav-able story I have written so many positive comments on). Ja-ne! (is that how you spell it?)
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So is Jakken the "excellency"? or is it Nadil or yet another evil dude. By the way, what EXACTLY are flames? They sound bad... Good story!

Another random comma! "We, were being watched" (again, I apoligize if this has already been mentioned). I have evil computer-hogging siblings, too...*sigh* Awesome!

Ah, so he didn't spit it all out! Clever Rune^_^ I visited your bio page...YAY! You like InuYasha and Yu Yu Hakusho,too! The "Excellency" guy is either Nadil or some random evil dude-.- Good writing.

Wonderful! One thing I don't get; Rune was so relucktent, so how come he just spit it all out? Thank You!

Thy cliffys!! The cliffys!! Once again, I complement you. Through you put a comma in the wrong place. "Before he could finish, his threat..." There isn't supposed to be a comma there. If someone has mentioned this and you've aknowledged it, I'm sorry for repeating it. Bye-Bye!

Pity poor Rune. And Rath too. He's got to be so confused... Anyways, another wonderful chapter. Altough it could use more humor (not that I'm the funnyist person in the world. Keep up the good work!

Oh. Cliffy. What I hate is cliffhangers with no more chapters after it. Anyways, beautifully written. Lots of suspense, and enough discription so someone can really see it in their heads. I'm pretty new here, (I can't even put stories up yet. Stupid two- day wait)so you've probably never heard of me, but I've been thinkin' of doing a Dragon Knights fic. Would you recemend it? Who's your favarite charecter? Mine's Rune.

Yay, u like Rune too!! Isn't he so CUTE! KAWAII! ^.^ Hope ya update!

love it!

o please please update