*crying* She never continued it... It was so good... Please write more, I want to see of this.

Wow, this was so good! Can't wait for the next bit!

"To be continued, if people would like me to..."
Geeze-o-pete! Of course we do!
What a fine piece of writing , very suspenceful.
Very good characterization, good dialogue. I am intrigued by the new characters, and Johnny's obsession with being proactive, rather than reactive, to the future and what it might hold.
I really hope you continue this story soon. (teasing us with one large chapter...how mean!)

This is really good! PLEASE keep writing!!

Very cool story, you must continue it!

Wow! I love your writing style.
I definantly want to read more. Don't keep me waiting too long ;)