Please continue! *puppy dog eyes*

Um... What is this getting at, exactly?

You've got a good style of writing, but it seemed like you kind of rushed into things. I mean, she just happens to be outside when Legolas is there, she shivers, he holds her, and suddenly she's saying "Our love is not meant to be"? What love? Holding someone when they're cold does not automatically mean that you're madly in love with them.

I think you could have a really good story here, given time. All in all, it's a lot better than many others I've read.

I am a huge fan of Legolas/Eowyn fiction. This is a really great story so far and i really hope you update soon.

Gah! Dump Aragorn! He's got Arwen! XD

Hm... Nice piece, though I wish there's a continuation. Where are the previous 2 chapters?

Yay! I am a firm believer in Legolas & Eowyn. They are so similar, it just makes sense that there would be attraction. I love JRRT dearly, but I think he dropped the ball on this one.
I hope you continue this fic and it is not just a one-parter.
I look forward to reading more!

Please write more. I like your lyrical style of writing. Where are you taking the story, there are a lot of possiblities between Legolas and Eowyn, even if you follow the book cannon, Legolas goes to live in Ithilien.

This is good so far. You must update so we all get to know what happens next.

Ahh! Another Legolas/Eowyn. Yay! Anyhow, great job and I really hope you'll update soon! Later!

Great chapter. I hope this isn't the end... is it? IS IT!?! So, yeah, update soon. :)

AWESOME start! I can't wait until the next chapter. I love the setup for them to fall in love, and also the pending danger of Helm's Deep. GREAT! More soon please please please :-)

AWESOME start! I can't wait until the next chapter. I love the setup for them to fall in love, and also the pending danger of Helm's Deep. GREAT! More soon please please please :-)

AWESOME start! I can't wait until the next chapter. I love the setup for them to fall in love, and also the pending danger of Helm's Deep. GREAT! More soon please please please :-)