That's an interesting theory about why Kyo always loses. I'm glad I caught the slight Yukiru. Cute.

interesting.

I know nothing whatsoever about FB. I came here looking for your WK fics, and found not only (gasp shock!) a couple of damn good AS fics-best KiraSet fic I ever saw, in fact-but this... I like this a great deal. Insight, angst, and feeling...very nicely done. So I wanted to tell you that even as a non fan of the anime, you made me feel for and like the characters, have an understanding of and a great deal of sympathy for the situation... nice little bittersweet ending, too... angst done in all the right ways. A good read...thanks!

... *bawls* That was so good but so depressing! Argh! And the characters were so well thought out, you could just picture this happening ... but it's just so sad! I love FB fics, and you did such an excellent job here. Thanks for writing this. *sniffles, wanders away*

Excellent theory. I was thinking the same thing too actually. But great fic. And no, I didn't blink all through reading so I wouldn't miss the Yukiru!

i like it..and i know a few things about some deal Akito made with Yuki and Kyou is this got anything to do with that good story cant wait for chapter 2

I never thought of Kyou's always loosing to Yuki like that. It's a very good theory. Your piece is very well written, it's not angst but a little bittersweet.

Such wonderful insight on Yuki and Kyo. Your writing is very nice, too (wonderful dialogue!), and fits perfectly with the Fruits Basket style. Kudos to you!