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| Bokormen 2008-07-06 ch 24,  | abuseReally liked this story. Hope you one day find inspiration to finish it. |
| Zephyrfox 2008-06-08 ch 24, | abuseAnd now I come to othe end. Will you ever update this? It has been an extremely well-plotted and well-written story. |
| Zephyrfox 2008-06-08 ch 21, | abuseJoe, lying in wait for a poor defenseless Airman and getting Teal'c instead, and his honor questioned. That was a fantastic scene. The alien ship targeting Seacouver, Sunnydale and Cascade is puzzling. What is it doing? |
| Zephyrfox 2008-06-08 ch 19, | abuseThis is fantastic. I loved Methos and Daniel. Methos is so stubborn, he knows that he can't possibly be wrong. And Sam, having such a hard time coping with change. Jack? Not stupid? You don't make colonel - in special ops, no less - by being an idiot. |
| Zephyrfox 2008-06-08 ch 18, | abuseWhere did you come up with your characters' names? I thought I was the only one who remembered Lucan! |
| Zephyrfox 2008-06-08 ch 16, | abuse"Could these files be mined, he wondered, in a hundred, or perhaps a thousand years time for topics such as "Strategy and infiltration: the case of Sol I", "Policy versus implementation: the Goa'uld occupation of Sol I", or perhaps "The Effects of Goa'uld withdrawal and return on the culture of the Tau'ri? He certainly intended to be around to write them." I'd like to be around to read them! :) |
| Zephyrfox 2008-06-08 ch 14, | abuseOh, I had forgotten the twist about the Goa'uld and the Horsemen. Wow! |
| Zephyrfox 2008-06-08 ch 13, | abuseI came across a reference to this story and decided to reread it. It's fantastic. I love all the side references to Star Trek, and other things. And Methos tryng to figure out if he's inthe midst of enemies or not is wonderful to read. |
| Inarae 2008-05-14 ch 24, | abuseLove this story. This is my second time reading it. Very realistic and edge-of-the-seat exciting. Thanks for the good read. |
| pain in the mikta 2008-03-19 ch 24, | abuseAww! Just found out those chapters! How come I wasn't warned?! Anyway, Margo, this is still a grand story and it deserves to be worked on some more so we get to know what happens next! Every part is grand, I luv the Smart Jack approach; you nicely manage to bring in what is know about him and weave it into your story so we can get insights into his life. I particularly like the way you're going with this in explaining his dislike of scientists! C'mon! Keep going! Pretty Please?! |
| Morrolan 2008-02-15 ch 24, | abuseIt's been an awful long time since you updated...are you still working on this story? It's really very good. Had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. |
| Gale 2008-01-11 ch 24, anon. | abuseThis is a fantastic story,it just has 1 flaw. It needs MORE chapters! I know that writing is very time consuming, but please update it soon. |
| dinawen 2007-11-06 ch 24, | abusenice story! |
| tokidokilove 2007-06-16 ch 24, | abusePlease update! I really do enjoy this story and I love the plot. I have actually been following this story for a while and was hoping that there was more. Please please continue! This is a great story and needs more... |
| Onaleia 2007-04-02 ch 24, anon. | abuseI enjoyed this. I always enjoy a Methos/SG1 crossover, but I especially appreciate one in which Methos does NOT volunteer information regarding his immortality. Good job here. And even though you seem to have stopped without finishing the story, I do appreciate that you have at least paused at a good stopping place. Thank you for sharing your talent and creativity. |