I am amazed with this ficlet. It's so angsty, but it ends on a lighter note. XP Please keep up the wonderful work. I love it. ^^

~firedraygon97

Whoa... a deep Shuichi. Not that I think he can't be he just rarely shows it, kinda like Yuki rarely shows his tender side. A very interesting point of view on Shuichi's doubts, I'd never thought of it before. Keep writing great stories!

hai! i read catalyst first and shu's pov here is just as beautiful and touching.

I usually enjoy these short little angstey fics. And hey, it's tough for anybody to do serious Shuichi. I liked it! ^-^

Shuichi's personality was perfect in this fic, it does sound like something Shuichi would have thought, he might be kinda clumsy and dumb but he's not stupid and he does care lotsa for Yuki. I love the parts about Yuki sleeping, heart wrenching.

OOh, very nice, Limey!

Short, but very much to the point.

Nice depth. I can definitely believe these are Shiyuu's thoughts and feelings.

Way to go!

Hope you have more of these waiting in the wings to be posted!