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Salena Knight
2006-05-27 . chapter 18
Wonderful story! ^_^ Please, PLEASE upate!!
aloavi
2005-08-18 . chapter 1
i really like ur stile of writeing
paddy89
2005-07-03 . chapter 18
hey! i love your story so far... i was really hoping by some huge chance that sirius would end up being his dad lol, but obviously that isn't what happend! haha.
i think that the detail and dialogue in your story are amazing; interaction between characters is so important for a good story, that's what i think anyways lol.
the only question i have is... how come at times Severus was being called Rus? or was it his brother that was Rus, but then who's Nutty? i was just alittle confused with the names is all! and did Lily have a crush on severus [carrying the picture, during summer], or was that a misunderstanding on his part; when petunia was yelling/explaining stuff to him?

also, i think that's totally cool about Lupin finding out about Harry! i'm sure he'll be there to support him. i'd imagine it'd be pretty traumatizing to find out that your dead father, isn't your real father. i don't think i'd WANT to know... sometimes it's better to leave well enough alone!
awsome chapters so far though, i hope you update soon :D:D

-paddy89
Athena Keating-Thomas
2005-04-15 . chapter 18
Very intriguing indeed. I hope you'll be continuing this one as well; as ever you're a wonderful writer with original ideas.
Athena Keating-Thomas
2005-04-15 . chapter 3
Wow. Powerfully written. I like the nice little parallelism you put in with the addition of the storm.
Athena Keating-Thomas
2005-04-15 . chapter 1
You know, it was only now reading your fic and more specifically the letter from Lily that it came across to me just what sort of horror and despair Harry could be feeling in those myriads of Severitus fics...
Sarah LoTuS
2005-04-09 . chapter 18
hey :)

I've just found your story, and I'm quite fascinated and confused... I hope it's not abandoned! I will be a faithful reader if you start updating it again!
Persephone Lupin
2004-11-05 . chapter 18
Please continue, this story is too good to be abandoned! Can't wait for the next chapter, will Snape blow up the whole Hogwarts?
Miakan
2004-11-05 . chapter 18
This is so interesting. I'm glad Snape hasn't miraculously turned into a loving guy. This is about the best Severitus out there. Post more soon, please!
Beth5572
2004-11-04 . chapter 18
I would love to see want you write next.

Thank you,

Terri
142010
2004-11-03 . chapter 18
Excellent. Can't wait for more.
krysalys73
2004-11-03 . chapter 18
YAY!
You didn't forget about this!
Great chapter. And I'm glad that Remus is so accepting and supportive with Harry. The poor kid needs all the support he can get right now.
Can't wait to see how this concludes!
*feeds muses Wilbur chocolate, better than Hershey's by far*
-}-@
Krys
Ronandchicken
2004-09-21 . chapter 17
Heh. Well. That was confusing. Took me a minute to pick up on the whole "Burnt plastic?" thing. Yeah. Update soon!
Adred Lightfoot
2004-08-19 . chapter 17
I really can't predict where this is going to go, but I'm enjoying the ride. ;) I really like the interplay between Dd and Snape. It was very canon of Harry to want to run away. I was unsure about Lupin's dialogue, somehow, but the nose-of-a-wolf detail is classy.
Adred Lightfoot
2004-08-19 . chapter 6
I thought I would stop to review here, at the twisty-turny cliffhanger. It's a superb read, bewejelled with references to your infamous Snape theories - the vampire one cracked me up. It has a fast pace, great dry humour, and Snape, Harry and Dumbledore are all very well in character (good Dumbledore, harks back to the Dd in the first book, more whacky than in later books). I absolutely love this chapter ending. Clever. There was nothing I didn't like.
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