I think that you certainly created an interesting concept when you decided to have Aryll be able to understand the seagulls. It also definitely fits. But I wonder if Link can also understand them. It can't be coincidence that Link's surname and the surname of the family that cared for Dalkin and Delia. Somehow I figured that the Deku Tree would transcend the time loop, since he can't exactly move from where he his. But the kagenmi really had me confused, and I can only assume that it has very high significance to Tetra. Since you had mentioned earlier on about the Seventh Sage being of Time, I think it obvious that Tetra, being the Princess, will definitely somehow awaken as the Sage of Time, reinforced by the kagenmi. Though she will have to escape the trap in order to do so, unless doing so allows her to escape it? Hmm...

Here's to continued excitement,
C.B.

Okay, I'm a bit confused. How is it that before now, Link found Tetra's ship in Jabun's Cave on Outset, but it is only just now being put there? Is it somehow related to the trap that she set off? Or is it some sort of flashback-thing? I am also confused how Jasper the Seagull got back on her ship when Link had just seen her(?). As for that weird Kei guy, I can only assume that he and Al have an interesting history. I suppose that Senkyoku is a third fairy and was somehow trapped by Kei? And why is Saimon (that is the name of Al's invisible fairy, right? He did call it that) invisible anyway? I guess stuff like that may just have to wait until I read farther ahead.

Your idea for the trap that Tetra set off to be powered by her anger is a pretty interesting idea as well. I will try to review as I continue to read more, but I have trouble making regular reviews, so I make no promises.

Thank you for writing,
C.B.

Kaepora Gaebora? Man I hate that owl...

Makar is just the cutest sage ever :D

"Nine Hells"? Is that a Dungeons and Dragons reference I see, hm?
Well, it's a great story, and a worthy sequel to such an extraordinary game. Good work.

Ok, I don't want to say this too hastily, but after my fourth time through this I think I'm getting quiet a bit more of this fic. The jumps between characters and times are also not so confusing this time, so your revisions really did work to make things simpler without detracting from the story line. I know this must seem totally out of place, but I felt like I really should tell you.

-Nny11

DON'T READ THIS FOR AT LEAST 24 HOURS AFTER YOU GET IT. I'M KIDDING. THAT LINE JUST SORT OF STUCK WITH ME.

Oh... excellently done, tying the three Fairies in like that, I knew it was about the three of them once all three names were finally revealed, but that was a beautiful way of putting it together. I'd say it was very 'legendary', but that gives the wrong impression. Mystic or tragic work much better =3

Heh, I'm listening to the Black Hawk Down Soundtrack while reading this, and when it came to Medli's piece the Minstrel Boy started playing, so she started dancing around in my head.

For some reason, although you named their father Link, I didn't actually connect with it being OoT's Link >_>;

I'm a tad disappointed with the lack of physical description you give the characters, although I've finally been able to stop giving Tetra her chubby cell-shaded appearance, but Medli still came into my head as a squat bird girl with a duck bill o_o;

How did the boat leave? o_O It could move in the game because it was posessed by the King, but come the end of the game, it's just wood again... right? Kinda hoping you explain that latter on.

The poems were interesting, but although they always started very strongly and as something to remember (as a childhood anecdote should be) they really stumbled come the end and just didn't work. Sorry to kick dirt on that even after this story's finished, at least I think it is, but still...

Very well done section with Kei/Delia, good way of manipulating the narrative to have that scratchy feel to it.

Huh... very interesting. I get most of it, not EVERY little thing, but the jist of things comes across well enough. Feel bad for the kids, obviously.

Umm... Kind of want to point out that in Wind Waker the pirate with the glasses (Mako?) mentions a match between Tetra and Gonzo. I guess there are very many ways of interpreting that, but still. o_O

Ah... now we're getting into a history. I like that ^_^ you've got me hooked by this point.

~Sunny

I have one thing to say:

Ne Ne neh!

Okay, that's not all, splendid plot movement this chapter, looking forward to where it leads next.

~Sunny

I've noticed a minor problem that might've been pointed out by someone else already, but here it is:

When character are speaking to one another, you should put a comma before their name. For example:

"What do you mean, mother?"

As opposed to:

"What, do you mean mother?"

I'm kinda sorry to point this out when it's clear you've edited everything heavily, but yeah ^^;

~Sunny

Ah, nothing like a really bad day/mood to make my actually sit down and continue reading an excellent story (I'm so backwards, I know!)

This is pretty good though, and you mentioned something about wanting another name? Well, there seemed to be a fair amount of letters, so maybe something concerning the mail? Really can't say, my own chapter titles tend to be a bit over dramatic.

Looking forward to the rest of this, mood is deffinatly improving.

~Sunny

every once and a while I stay up until 6:00 a.m. to finish something that's really good, and when I say every once and a while I mean I've only done it twice. it looks like you haven't updated in a long time, but: good job.

Huh, interesting. I haven't read anything of a decent length or plot for a while, so this is looking very appealing to me. I hope I won't be disappointed. =P