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anon
2003-10-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseNO! Not the end! Please continue! Please continue! This is good, please more!
Ilovemypenguin
2003-10-02
ch 1,
abuseThat is a good story. It was very emotional and heart felt. I liked it.
moni
2003-09-29
ch 1, anon.
abusei think this could be the start to something wonderful
LinZ
2003-09-29
ch 1, anon.
abusei like it right up until the end, the end seems clipped, like your trying to get it over and done with, getting rid if it? i dunno...

LinZ
Joann
2003-09-28
ch 1, anon.
abusemore more!! NO!! not the end this is like a "pilot"! its great!! u can make it into something more!! please!! more!! pretty please??with a vaughn on top?? lol(what IS a Vaughn? i don't even know)
daria
2003-09-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseo..yes more. and then change to sark/syd ship. muahahaha...those are the best!
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