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| anon 2003-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseNO! Not the end! Please continue! Please continue! This is good, please more! |
| Ilovemypenguin 2003-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThat is a good story. It was very emotional and heart felt. I liked it. |
| moni 2003-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abusei think this could be the start to something wonderful |
| LinZ 2003-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abusei like it right up until the end, the end seems clipped, like your trying to get it over and done with, getting rid if it? i dunno... LinZ |
| Joann 2003-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abusemore more!! NO!! not the end this is like a "pilot"! its great!! u can make it into something more!! please!! more!! pretty please??with a vaughn on top?? lol(what IS a Vaughn? i don't even know) |
| daria 2003-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseo..yes more. and then change to sark/syd ship. muahahaha...those are the best! |