That was great! I definitely think it deserves to be continued. I'm really curious to find out about Sydney's motives to leave and to get a little more background on Sydney and Vaughn's relationship.

NO! Not the end! Please continue! Please continue! This is good, please more!

That is a good story. It was very emotional and heart felt. I liked it.

i think this could be the start to something wonderful

i like it right up until the end, the end seems clipped, like your trying to get it over and done with, getting rid if it? i dunno...

LinZ

more more!! NO!! not the end this is like a "pilot"! its great!! u can make it into something more!! please!! more!! pretty please??with a vaughn on top?? lol(what IS a Vaughn? i don't even know)

o..yes more. and then change to sark/syd ship. muahahaha...those are the best!