Wow. I like it, in an odd sort of way. It is well written, nicely arranged to seem a bit vauge. (Of course, maybe you weren't trying for that...)

Keep going with your other fics!

-Aly

He smiles sadly. "Poor hollow boy. Don't you learn at all?"
^_^

Yay! From the very apt quotes, to the line that jumped up and bit me in the backside. "Speaking a language far older than latin and far less dead." Oh yeah, that was good. I haven't heard it put quite so well in a long time. But, as always mate, better than my poor reviewing skill will allow me to appreciate properly. Coolness as usual dude.

This is really good,mainly because its different. I hope you carry on with this, and check out my story if you ever get the time!