Very sad, for a begginging...love every bit of it more chapters please!

rating 10!

yes! u that stupid bastard is dead... god i hate him and his annoying voice.

I think that it was a very good story. I do think that killing Jaken was not needed.

im sorry but y did u make rin so cold??

ITS A TIME TO CELEBRATE! Rin and Sesshi making love (well written by the way, specialy for your first) ANd Jyaken is DEAD! Woohoo!

Rin..Kills...AWSOME!
Hee hee hee hee

-Rin Chan

This was more of a lime than a lemon. Other than that, I thought it was great.

Wow quite interesting! lol I like SessRin Fics

Loved it!

I love it! But it was a little too sad for me... *wipes tears*

3 words..I LUV IT! Amazing story!! the way u wrote it was exquisite, and more likely, the plot was also amazing. =] *2 thumbs up* added 2 fav. stories ^__^

wow! i loved it! it was so unexpected, yet it made sense! of course living with sessy would make her believe that emotions=bad! but this can't possibly be the end, can it? there has to be more to the story!
i really liked how, even though you sorta started the reader in the middle of things, it wasn't confusing or anything.

that was sad, and that was not a lemon. that was citrusy. no lemon. and it kinda confused me as to why rin killed jaken. but whatever. i hate the little toad so who cares. and once sesshomaru, killed jaken, but he had to use the tenseiga to bring him back.

i thought it was pretty good for your first lemon. keep up the good work.

I've read your story, and i loved it. I'd love to see more Inu fics from you. Especially Rin/Sess ones.. ;)

That was disturbing, not in a necessarily bad way. More in an eye opening, 'I never would have thought about that' type of way. I never thought of Rin as being anything but sweet but after spending so much time with Sesshoumaru it is likely she could learn to be cruel. Anyways I enjoyed reading it, good luck with your writing