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| grumpy 2005-07-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseJust wanted to say how much I enjoyed your story of the birth of Argorn and of Aragorn's son. Loved that "patiene is the virtue of a kings.." |
| Patty 2005-07-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseLovely . . . sniff! Seriously, I loved both stories. Having Faramir by Aragorn's side was a nice touch. Made me wonder whether he was a father yet. |
| shirebound 2005-07-26 ch 2, | abuse"We exchange words of love, of unabashed joy... but everything is dwarfed in the face of our child." My goodness, what a beautiful story! You've bridged these two generations wonderfully. At least Eldarion was born into a world at peace, and would grow up knowing both his parents. |
| shirebound 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI know that the day will come when you will leave the shelter of this house for the harshness of the wilds. Men will one day shun you, and creatures of darkness will hunt you like a beast. The fate which passed to me with the death of my father will be passed to you on my death. It is our burden, my son. Our gift and our curse. This is just wonderful. |
| ArcherGal2932 2005-07-26 ch 2, | abuseHow loving and sweet...two births two lifetimes apart. It warms my heart. The loyalty and love of the two fathers to their sons and wives is breathtaking. Keep writing, you have great work, and I'll look for more soon. -ArcherGal2932 |
| Raksha The Demon 2005-07-26 ch 2, | abuseA nice pair of stories about parenthood. One quibble - Faramir's eyes are not "dark", they are grey, and were described also as "keen and bright". I do like that you had Faramir understand Aragorn's suffering. |
| Your Worst Nightmare13 2004-05-02 ch 1, | abuseAw...sweet and well-written. Aragorn is indeed nasty. ^_^ |
| heather 2003-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is wonderful. Please update again soon. |
| Tears of Telperion 2003-11-11 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great fic. ^^ I've always wondered about Arathorn, I suppose. I just hope you update soon! ~AF |
| AimeeKensington 2003-10-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is brilliant! We actually get to see through the eyes of a character we really never saw much of before...I absolutely love it! I have read quite a few things by you, and every single one of your fics has amazed me. :) I am also a HUGE Aragorn/Arwen fan... |
| GeneticallyElvenGryffindor 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written! I can't wait to read more! |
| Eokat 2003-09-28 ch 1, | abusevery nice, I enjoyed this chapter. KAT. |
| TheAnonymousAgent506 2003-09-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is excellent! And very well written! I'm looking forward to reading more. |