I just finished reading your fan fic and I'm really interested in how you plan on ending it. Will Botan play a larger role in future chapters on will it be a vague she likes Kurama thing till the end? Also will Hiei be more involved in the story? No matter how you plan on moving the story further I can't wait to read it :) You also have done a great job in keeping Hiei in characted!

Te prophecy sounds like some sort of Romeo an' Juliet trilogy. You're gonna' force her ta' get closer to Hiei aren't ya...Thaaat's why y'er keep'in 'er a'wa from Kurama...

Oh cruel fate...

Te prophecy sounds like some sort of Romeo an' Juliet trilogy. You're gonna' force her ta' get closer to Hiei aren't ya...Thaaat's why y'er keep'in 'er a'wa from Kurama...

Oh cruel fate...

I am so loving this. Ayane doesn't seem slutty or annoying to me, she just wants to be with Hiei. Who wouldn't want that? Please update soon. I'll try to review sooner (I've been so busy and chapter updates have been filling my e-mail for months).

Jyanne

Hmm... Very interesting! Though I will have to admit that at teh end of chapter 12, I was a little confused about the explination for the woman that attack Mizuki. Might I suggest that you lenthen the time for that explination so that readers (me and possibly more), would be less confused?

Your story is very good, please continue! I'd like to see the next chapter soon!

yo man it's great plz continue yah...

Oh myy! I absolutely love this story. You are doing such a marvelous job of keeping everything together. I know it must be confusing for you, and I applaud you for your effort and hard work! Marvelous story. I look forward to reading more from you.

can't wait for the next chapter!

I knew Mizuki was acting weird... ok more of a creepy slut, and Hiei like this person that took over Mizu body! *shivers* I thinks that just creepy. Good stoy even if the last chapter was freaky.

Ok, I don't even know what to say after reading this. It's so good, I love it. That doesn't seem like enough. I'd go into detail about everything that happened, but you know what happened, YOU WROTE IT! I am seriously loving this fic so far. Plz Plz Plz update soon.

Ja ne

talk about mood swings... nice chap. please update soon!

ah! she's infected with the public school sickness! run! whoah, Mizuki's acting really strange... haha, update soon

Wow... that was... interesting... But a very cool chapter _ keep up the good work

Yummy! (My new word) Me likes! I would totally hate it if my brother was that protective of me. This totally makes me glad to have a big family! Was Mizu posessed by that Ayane gorl or something? I was confused for a little while until she suddenly snapped out of it. Andwho, good job. Update soon please!

very good.