 Ang 1/5/11 . chapter 6 it was Spinelli with amnesia it is defently her why would she have dreams about that if she not |
 Slytherin's Sempra 9/2/10 . chapter 6hey is amy acctually Spinelli? coz u sed in the story 'i dont no anything ever since my parents found me' so that means Spinelli could have survived? :) |
 Anon 2/17/09 . chapter 6 Unfortunately, there is much to improve. Not on your writing, because you writing is great, but your OC, Amy is just a cheap rip-off of Spinelli.
A Mary-Sue, of sorts, using one established character and improving them until they're just, well, boring.
Don't take it personally, it's just some constructive crititism, and I'm seeing a great writer in the making. |
 Hazel Wish 10/27/04 . chapter 6Great fic! Loved the ending. I don't think there should be another chapter added, the ending was as great as it was. I like how Spinelli didn't magically come back to life and go with TJ and live happily ever after. I mean why should Amy be Spinelli? Why can't she just be Amy? Yes, it's TJ with another girl, but he has to move on with his life, ya know!
Anyway, great ficcy! :-) |
 soccergurl1990 4/5/04 . chapter 6So sad. Poor Spenilli. Great story though. Write another chapter though telling him that she is Spenilli. |
 Rachel 3/25/04 . chapter 6 hi i thought your story was great but is amy spinelli you have got to do a num 2 please |
 supernovalikewhoa 3/20/04 . chapter 6this is sweet |
 noelle 1/14/04 . chapter 6 i loved the story.. and i dont want to be rude.. but i didnt like the ending..i wanted it to be spinelli.. and its a sad story..i mean tj loves her. but he loves spinelli..idk how to explain... like i said i really did like the story.. but the ending sort of makes me feel bad.. |
 political princess 1/14/04 . chapter 6 not at all what i expected-my imagination tells me amy will hit her head and get her memory back and realize she really is spinelli-good job keep writing-please can u r/r my stories (pen name political princess) thanks! |
 Chad Wick 1/14/04 . chapter 6Whoa! You definitely threw me off there! LOL Hats off to you for making all of us (readers) think that it was Spinelli...but then again could it be? With those flashbacks? Hm... you still left us with a chance that it could be Spinelli with amnesia..
LOL, yeah you left us with that pondering question IF IT IS TRUELY SPINELLI OR NOT...which makes this story all the more awesome and amazing! Ending with, "There's still a chance I could be your Spinelli..."
ROFL, the tension and frustration of wanting to know is REALLY GREAT! I hope to see more of your incredible suspensful work! |
 noelle 12/24/03 . chapter 5 u said there was one more chapter to go..where is it? please update it! please... i read ur profile down to the bottom.. that one quote bout tj and mr monk monk that was frum the experiment which i saw at 1:30am this morning..and yesterday at 4:30.. lol.. i love that episode..spinelli and tj so like each other ha ha..U P D A T E P L E A S E I W A N T T O R E A D T H E R E S T ! ! ! ! |
 Toshiba 12/20/03 . chapter 2 “The fat lady will catch me.”
I dunno why but I laughed by guts out at that! Hehe I never heard them call Finster fat before! |
 Liv 12/13/03 . chapter 5 i love it! i can't wait to find out if amy is really spinelli or what... |
 Paris Marriott 12/4/03 . chapter 5wow! idk what to say, this is, incredible! please continue! |
 tigerseye8888 11/28/03 . chapter 5 OH-MY-GOD! You HAVE to continue! I finally caught up today & the anticipation is swelling up inside me. I'm gonna burst soon...!
*ahem* Anywhoz, please continue, this one very beautiful story. :-)) |