I dont know what to say to your increadibly insightful story. I think that this is a perfect one shot that shows the real conflicts, that all the pilots must have to go through...

Hey-hey, I DuoxQuatre Friendship fiction. Yeehaw! About time I found one. There are too few of fictions like these in this catagory. I liked it was conversational and Contemplating-ish. That was a complement.
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It was almost too flowery, but I really enjoyed it. Like chocolate ice cream with chocolate chips. Anyway, those two guys have a really cool friendship. And I really liked Duo's reference to penance there near the end. Too many people ignore his background. Props!

I liked this a lot. It was a good inside in Quatres's thoughts.

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Wow, that was a great story; your descriptions flowed very nicely and I just liked the fact that it was a moment with Quatre and Duo. _ Great job!

Hey girlie; this is kind of a moot point on many levels, most notably the fact that a) We share a dorm and b) I know nothing about Gundam Wing, but hey, I can gush praises of you as well as the next person. :)

Your writing is oh-so awesome. You are such a vivid characterizer (that's not even a word. oh well.) and I enjoy reading everything you write, from the Notebook to your English papers. You pen lines that could give anyone, from Stephen King to Barbara Kingsolver to J.K. Rowling, a run for their money.

And where would I be without you? Answer me that. I would be incredibly lost (and short a roommate) and the Notebook would never have come to be, nor would a good percentage of anything I did, for that matter. Hell, I wouldn't be sitting right here, right now if it wasn't for you. I'd be sitting somewhere else, probably never picking up a pen unless to write soppy love notes that would utterly suck. And...*gasp* I wouldn't have my Riker/Chakotay/Ares/Bashir/Trip obsessions! I wouldn't even have my pen name, assuming that I'd heard of ff.net without you around! AAh! I'm stopping this depressing train of thought and will gradually make my way to meet you and the guys for lunch.

I love you bunches and if you don't keep writing I'll undress Chekov again. *wicked grin* Em

This is such a sweet story, and what you said about them being nothing better than biological mobile dolls without Quatre is so true! He is my favourite character in GW! This story is great, thanks for putting it up!