LMAO! Millenium Cheezit? HA!

Slifer the cookie dragon. Joey was talking about his friend, the cookie...

I love you for writing this.

Okay! well, i just finished reading all six of your chapters and they were all great! I especially loved Joey's telling of the Gingerbreadman. It was hilarious, sounded just like him too. Anyway, r u going to try to do a Little Red Riding Hood story with these as well?

Can't wait till you update! Till next time!

hahahahahahahahahaha i love this story

this story is very funny. plz update soon. _Ja ne!

The story wasn't so bad... It wasn't all happy and funny like the other ones, but it actually held promise. I mean...a hand that kept steering the vehicle? That's pretty eerie... Heh. I'd like to see more horror-like fics from you, but then I'd like more fluff to, so...meh.

Oh...and it seems I'm at the last one, ne? ;

*evil snigger* "Your stories suck."

Seto deserved that. *glare* Man...poor Yuugi-chan... Heh...I almost feel sorry for Seto... Almost. *snigger* Sounds pretty Mokie-ish of a tale though. -

Formerly known as Sleepy Hollow - that alone cracked me up, for some reason. And hearing Mai tell it... *rolls* That was great. Meh, my reviews are going to start getting repetitive though. Just watch. *pout*

Heh, and of course, you had to sneak some azureshipping in sometime. *wink* I can tell this is where your style started to change. It became more poetic from this point on, though you've gotten far better at the flow. Also more subtle about things.

The story was actually pretty funny, and a far more entertaining version of Rupunzle.

*sniffle* Puny... *huggles Yuugi-cookie* Poor Yuugi-chan! And if Seto-fox had eaten him, I'd be killing a Mamo-fluff right now. ;3

Anyhow...the part I loved the most, for some odd reason:

“Serenity, next time ya go baby-sittin’ lemme’ know...

OMG! ; Okay...I know...I need to come up with something other than just that... Hold on.

You know...even though you're a better writer now, there's something in the humour simplicity of your earlier fics I just adore. I can't really explain it...but it reminds me of how I started out... Humour fics first, then I got super dark and started to improve along the way. Now I can't seem to be quite as funny as I was, but people seem to like my stuff anyway.

Meh, enough about me. Sorry... Apologies a hundred times over.

Anyhow, the first chapter was hilarious. Seriously. I'm glad I read this today...it was just...needed. But just picturing Pegasus living under a bride... *smirk* Or learning ballet. *smirk* And to think, that was Yuugi telling the story. Actually, it was just a humourous retelling... It's kinda like what I did at the RP, only better and more entertaining. v!

I promise to keep reading and review each chapter, for a change. ;; It's what I used to do, after all. ;;

I'm confused...oh well. if yo still need the help...i'm here. email me and beware of rants.

marik: will you let me out of these chains already?

skunky: nah, the fangirls are already coming.

marik: what? NO! unhand me mortal! bow before as I will one day be your-

skunky: *stuffs his mouth full of bacon soap*

odion; bacon...soap *starts stroking the bar of soap, with another one stuffed in his mouth.

skunky: Gir! release the fangirls!

gir: *opens cage* FANGIRLS! HEEHEEHEE!

-skunky

TBC

which means you have to write more to see what happens to marik! oh i'm so evil...*cackles* BEWARE! BWAHAHAHAHA-

kaiba: *shoves bacon soap in her mouth*

mamono: teehee!

skunky: mph!...m

heheheh.

marik: everyone remain calm, we are taking control of buisness!

bystanders: EEK! *whispering* lookit the size of that thing on his head!

gir: BEWARE! *suddenly starts giggling*

skunky: ARG!

gir: Heehee!

skunky: GIR! WHY WAS THERE BACON IN THE SOAP?

gir: I MADE IT MYSELF! *points at marik* he helped too.

marik: uh oh. ODION HELP ME!

odion: *tied up and gagged with a bar of bacon soap in his mouth* m... blafcehn!

-skunky

(ps. marik is so dead.)

heheh his headband..yeah that's funny..if you want bizzare stories from me, you can probably get them-

marik: BEG FOOLISH MORTAL OR I WILL SEND YOUR MIND TO THE SHA-

skunky: *socks him* shut up before I stick your spikes in the electric socket again.

marik: *sulks and is immediately tackled by gir* REMOVE YOURSELF FROM MY HEAD FEINDISH DOG!

gir: LETS MAKE BISCUITS!

skunky: anyway, I have a huge collection of fairy tales, if you're stuck i'd love to help.

-skunky

skunky:try a psychiatrist tea.

mamono: but I thought you were reading psycology.

shade: -_-U a real psychiatrist, one who will not try to kill him every chance she or he gets.

*explosions*

skunky: MARIK! I SAID NO MORE MAKING BISCUITS WITH GIR!

gir: I'm gonna eat a rat!

marik: I had no idea that exploding potatoes in the microwave was so much fun...ODION!

odion: yes?

marik: MORE POTATOES!

skunky: take five odion. let him lose his mind and cause certain bodily harm to others on his own *notices that odion is gone* never mind, go help him by all means and cause yourself almost certain bodily harm.

Gir: *giggling in the other room, on odion's head*

odion: *thinking* I will be patient, i will- OW! that's my hair! I don't have much of that left!

skunky: *sigh* they never listen.

marik: I shall rule the-

*microwave blows the door open, dousing him in steaming exploded potatoes*

skunky: then again...this might be somewhat entertaining.*grabs popcorn and a bottle of habanero sauce*

-skunky

“This Ginger bread man sounds stupid...