Whoa now that was beautiful. It makes such a difference when authors have such an idea of the world, really analyse the things the game leaves unsaid.

Your characterisations and the dynamic between Zell and Irvine and the dialogue are all heart-breakingly beautiful. One of the far better fics I have ever read in any genre, ever.

Just. Amazing work.

Brilliantly disturbing the way that the GF's play with people's minds in here.

damn. This is well written, and awsome ) I like it, it is... diffrent, in a god way )

Terra

Excellent, or as one could say ‘spiffy’. The characterizations were just amazing and I love how you managed to flesh out even the characters that didn’t have a big part through the ones that did, and then couple that along with the soldier philosophy of “Do I really like to kill?” and it was just perfect. Really well done. I like how you got Irvine’s snarky attitude just right. Writing the characters well makes the story all that much more refreshing to read.

Really, really nicely done. I enjoyed reading it immensely.

Artemis Z.

Zell killed himself? holy crap thats so not cool its just, argh! well, anyways, it was a very excellent peice, angsty, wonderful... I like what you've done here and your different interpretations of all the magic and GF's. great job, i'd like to see a ton more from you :)