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| PhoebeOtaku 2004-02-14 ch 1,  | abuseonce again. Love it. More fluff! more more more!! |
| Serenity Blossom 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseAh, too cute! That made me seriously long for a boyfriend! What a wonderful story, Serenity |
| Sarien 2003-11-05 ch 1, | abuseThis one shot was a nice addition to the Makoto/Aoshi little duet. We get to see how much things have progressed between the couples and how the relationship has caused them to change (Aoshi saying I love you!?). It was well written as always M.A. (or Vash-chan). My favorite part was when Misao hinted about wanting to wear a kimono and acted reluctant when Mako offered to take her. ^__^ Price less. I'm sorry to see this series end (or has it...). I'm also sorry that I've reviewed so late. I just haven't had much pc access lately. ^__^ Until your next wonderful fanfic. -Sarien |
| Blood Beast 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseOOh so good! I always enjoy the crisp way you write...whenever you descirbe something, I can see it in my mind and my body tingles. But that could be because of my vast love for you. Again, super-uber-great job! PS- didja get my email? |
| Girls Of Darkness 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved it Vash-Chan! It was so sweet and I liked the ending. Now I feel so lonly. I realy do need to talk to my guy, beause I want a kiss. Whaa! Well I think this was simple and sweet and I adore your writting. |
| Lady Light 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseI knew you'd do a great job! Gotta love your writing. hehe Misao and Soujiro and Mako with Aoshi-kun. *dreamz* ~*~ Lady Light |
| Kourui 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseHey Val-chan, I hope you don't mind me calling you Val-chan? I bet you're wondering where I got it from huh? Well, the V is from Vash and the al is from Almasy. ^_^;; I read Ai no E and I enjoyed it. I like how you made the text so very simple yet created an image with every word. I like how you portrayed Misao and Soujiro's relationship. innocent and genuine, with curiousity for the future. But the best part was when Makoto and Aoshi confessed their love to each other and how Aoshi didn't quite expect it. You did a fine job overall Val-chan. I will forever be one of your fans Keiko |