Well done. I really enjoyed this.

This is fantastic! Heartwarming and excellently written...another one of those jewels from this site that not enough people know about. The characters are so well done and believable, and you did a great job with the accents. A wonderful piece, I'd love to see more like it!

Pure Greatness! I love seein' Remy and Ro as friends. This was a great story. Love the dialogue.

I don't even know where to begin. For lack of a better adjective, the dialogue is simply extraordinary. The words flowed so effortlessly I forgot I was reading and instead listened to richly accented voices. You crammed an incredible story into such a small space with such a simple plot; I am simply in love with this fic.

Your superb knowledge of Lousianna culture, Cajuns, Remy, and Tante Mattie made a good story into much more. Nicely done.

What a lovely piece of writing!

I think you hit the accents dead on, which can be really difficult to do. I also really like your characterization of Tante Mattie. (And thanks for her full name, I couldn't for the life of me remember it.) It's also a good characterization of young Storm, since most of the fics I've found make her too sugary sweet. What I should probably just say is: An excellent character piece all around.

It would have been easier to read if you'd seperated the dialogue out a little more. For every new speaker, start a new line. So if Remy interrupts, move it to the next line. It'll break up the big blocks and make it easier on the eyes.

I've lived in Louisiana for most my life, My father is creole and I'm a big R/O fan. You did such a good job with everything and ( not that it matters any coming from me) but I'm proud of it. You did great. Love it!

GoddAMN that was a good story! I'm partial to the Louisiana Remy who's true to his roots and doesn't mind letting his soft side show. Also, ten million points (pints? whichever you prefer) for having it co-star Tante Mattie. Doesn't it make you wish you had your very own tante to make you feel like you're the most important kid in the world?

You know, I almost didn't read this but now I'm really glad I did. Great work. I'm going to go read your other story now and wish I had a bowl of jambalaya to go with it.

I really enjoyed this fic. I love stories about Gambit and Young-Stormy hehe. The only criticism I have (which I also mentioned in my review for your other new fic) is Gambit's accent. It seemed too thick and hard to read. Other than that, the story was really good.

Awe, that's so cute! You have a really good writing style, and I hope to see more from you.

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