Oh, wow! This is certainly interesting. I never imagined it to be like that beyond the veil... very imaginative!
~ Columbine

aLoha =] hurry up and post the next chappie ^^ or maybe Sirius should meet Lily and James and they write a letter to Harry and Sirius delievers the letters, they defeat Voldemort, and THEN Sirius dies...hm...^^ I just hope you don`t kill off Sirius immediately =]

Yeah, that's right Sirius...run, run for your life, Harry still needs you...yeah, anyway, I love your story!!

~Siri

ooh Very good and well written..Your characterization is good too but just make sure you put some reckless Sirius-like deeds in there hehe. Well update this soon!

*~*BlueJewel*~*

Well done keep it up,

I'm just dreading having to write Sirius's death.
I think! his eye colour is just descibed as dark?
LUV NIK.