i just found your story and i think its amazing but you havent updated in a long long time please update soon i hate it when writers just up and abandon a story so tell me you havent.

CONTINUE! This fic is borderline addicting (I simply adore storys like these). Please continue soon!


BTW: Bullet holes depend on how large the shell is, half a yen in size sounds roughly right.

Yep, yep YEP! Fantastic! I knew it would be when i started reading! Not only do i like your representation of the actual Grav. characters, i like your originals (Juni, nanae etc.)! Please keep it up and update soon!

Just read the first chapter and WOW ^_^!
Its kinda sad, coz Yuki doesnt have his little Shu-kun around but, you can tell he still loves the guy. Cant wait to find out how he deals with all the trauma, and I can't WAIT to read the rest!

Keep it up! (Yuki and Shu forever, hooray!)

The whole fic I kept denying Yukito was Shuichi, because it seemed way too obvious...But you were making it obvious in a totally-not-obvious-way! (Does that make sense? Probably not...XP) So then, because you kept mentioning how Yukito didn't know where he got those glasses from, and yet they were always a part of him, and how the other guy who murdered/kidnapped Shuichi had glasses, I thought maybe Yukito WAS the one who killed Shuichi...But then with Kyoko saying she had finally figured it out, I thought I was all wrong and that Yukito WAS Shuichi, but now you're making me doubt our main-character-OC is Shuichi again! Wah! I'm so confused! I love it! LOL. I hope you update this soon. I'm so glad I didn't find this sooner, though. With the 6-months to year long waits you had between chapters, I think I would have died of anticipation. lol Please don't take as long for the next chapter! I can't believe you killed Kyoko, though. ;_; She was my favorite OC. ;_; Oh well, you (possibly) killed my favorite canon character, Shuichi, so it all makes sense - you're just killing off all my favorite characters! XD; Oops, there goes Yuki XD; Lol please update soon!! ^^

*looks franitcally aroundnad began to rock back and forth* Update Update Update Update Update SON


You know... Updating OUTSTANDING stories so your rabid readers don't go nuts and threaten to beat the ** out of there little brother becuase their going through withdraw of updates again, and are slowly, antoginizingly slow going insane is a good thing... *Looks up thoughtfull* you should try it sometime

*cackles evielly*

so, children, what the moral of the story, today?

*random child* That authors that write amazing stories shouldn't torture their fans, and Update soon, or else those readers are going to egg their anooying teachers house and plead isanity, due to lack of updates from heart stopping stories

Very good!

*Pulls out pet rock and whispers in ear* think we got the point across that people who written heavenly fanfictions should update soon becuase this pyscotic reader is going togo stick her head in the toliet until the author of that life changing fanfic decided that this reader is blue enough and need immedaite mental help.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon

*pulls stuffed kumagoro out of pocket* everyday i don't see that there's a update, Kumagoro is inflicted with another deadly, bloddy, extremely PAINFUL dieses which cna only be cure by update from life giving fanfictions

UPDATE! WAH WAH WAH

*drops over dead, doctor comes in, checks pulse, and nodds* yep, lack of update from Extrionary fanfiction. *shakes head, then catches sight of author* Are you the cause of this? If you are, then you MUST< and I repeat MUST update, that crazy obsessive fan's life depends on it, she won't make it, if you don't update.

*some random talking bear coems out of no where and holds up a sign* Update Update Update

Thank You
(this has been a bout of tempory insanity, only cured by UPDATE!)

Oh...and I believe Yukito is Shu-chan, but still killed Shu-chan, in a way. And Tohma was the 'murderer'. He set it up so Erie wouldnt be able to be with Shu-chan anymore!

I absolutly LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story! Its AWSOME! I've been reading it for a while, and this is my first review on I cant wait for chapter 23! Erie+Shu-chan 4eva!

Great chapter!!
I don't like Ai ¬¬ Did he killed Shuichi?? Yuki isn't Shuichi? Or are his memories so bad that he by some kind of weird thing make him think like he is the murderer and not the victim?
Hope you update pretty soon, please!! :)

oh my god, did yukito just said that he killed shuichi? he must be joking... well he is delirious... this is an unexpected twist. e may be fighting his demons inside... oh well, it's just a hunch. update soon!

Did he really kill Shuichi? I thought he was Shuichi. Great now I'm confused. Update soon and end my confusion. Great story by the way.

"Latte"

as tohma i am waiting for absolute unsderstandig...right now im kinda going back and forth in my own mind

very good love it and can not wait for more of the story i love the way tohma hear him say shindo shuichi name ha more .

I can't wait for the next update.

This is the most confusing story i have ever read. its so hard for me to follow! lol.

keep it up!