Reviews for Work's a Killer

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101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 9,	abuseeach time you refer to your reviewers as kids it remind me of Jack from Stargate SG-1... that was a really nice ending, it was so nicely linked to the previous letter; question is, who told her about how Jesse reacted to the previous letter? could it have been Mark?
101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 8,	abuseJesse is one in a million. I have to agree with Steve on that point. i loved the interegation scenes and i really feel for Joel, i would have liked to know a little more about him or have seen him appear more in this fic, he sounds fun.
101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 7,	abuseI love how you write your character interactions... steve is angry again? he really has to work on his temper, a raised blood pressure isnt good for anyone! ;)
101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 6,	abuseyou're breaking my heart again! and it hurts! I want Jesse to be alright, but this is gruesome (but in a good way - is there such a thing? well there is as I have decided there is, it makes it all the more dramatic)
101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 5,	abusei loved the fact that steve knew Jesse would cringe at what Jule said. the ending is a little bit sinister! eek!
101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 4,	abusenice round up on the letter. although I think it might haunt Jesse a bit. nice detecting by Steve. I want to say more, but I cant think of anything to say.
101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 3,	abusethis is going to be a long-ish review so sit back and relax that letter is heart breaking! i cant believe Mark read it out loud, brilliant as that was in rubbing mroe salt into Jesses wounds, part of me found it a littel OC (but only a smidge) i loved the fact that both Steve and Mark asked Jesse if he believed the letter! i loved the fact that steve got so riled up about the letter that he made both Mark and Jesse cringe. and that ending, well it broke my heart. this scene made me want to hug Jesse and i had to kepp telling myself that this is just fiction and that i cant stop any of this from happening or physically give Jesse a hug, so as this is the case can you please pass on my virtual hug?
101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 2,	abuseConspiracy theroy! Jesse really is a mini mark! i don't like the sound of Pete... i can see all this spelling trouble for Jesse! go exclamation marks!
101spacemonkey 2008-05-14 ch 1,	abusea suspicious death, eh? well i never... i liked the interaction between Mark and Steve. very cute!
HELENz 2008-01-19 ch 9,	abuseLoved it! Very nice way of wrapping it up! :D
HELENz 2008-01-19 ch 8,	abuseOk so I haven't reviewed a chapter yet (shame on me!)... I'm reading this story in one take... It's very good! I agree with many here - you have characterized everyone well, especially Jesse (which earns you KARMA points from me! Jesse's my favorite!)... I am sorry about the reviews you have been recieving; Quite rude, if I might say myself! :P But you seem to be taking it in stride. Good for you! :D I for one, am glad that you didn't give up, and finished this! So my three favorite things about this chapter: The title... 'Good Cop, Bad Cop, Sarcastic Cop'... Funniest title EVER! Steve's Interogation... Hillarious! The last line... Yup, that's Jesse, and that's why we all LOVE him!:D
Alyce 2007-05-22 ch 5, anon.	abuseGood for you being strong to shrug of someone being a jerk to you! A spelling mistake or two don't make you a bad writer. You are a great writer and get the characters just right! Can't wait to read more of this and other stories you have done. Cheers!
epalladino 2006-06-30 ch 9,	abuseGreat story. Very well written and all in character. Beth Palladino (P.S. some grammatical errors here and there, but who cares in something this good. However, whereas 'Mrs.' or 'Mr.' should have a period, 'Miss' does not need one. Just for your information.)
A-blackwinged-bird 2005-04-22 ch 9,	abuseAw... perfect ending. I love this story. Fast moving and angsty and funny all wrapped up together. big grin I can't understand why you stopped writing. ME
A-blackwinged-bird 2005-04-22 ch 7,	abuseWow, gripping resusitation! (I'm not sure how to spell that, I should ask my beta...) I like the intro with the power-walking nurses, and how Jesse made small talk with his pregnant roommate. lol. Also how he had to spend the night. Poor kid. Now for Steve to go kick some butt, right?? ME

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