I don't think it sucks, it's good! I liked it :)

Another great one B.D. Kep writing.

I agree with with pruningshears, why does everyone kill Bakura. Yes i know he's suicidal if you think about it. It was great though!

I like it. I really do. I can't put into words exactly but its really good bookdragon. ^_^

i know I've probably mentioned this before, but WHY DOES EVERYONE KILL BAKURA?!?!?!? i mean, is it an unspoken rule? does he really seem sucidal to you? well, the writing was great, but WHY DOES EVERYONE KILL HIM OFF?! anyway i really dont know if this was a flame or not, i just finished 2 hours of studying sociolinguistics and japanese so i'm a bit fried, it isnt meant to be one anyway.

Nice...