Omg that was WONDERFUL! Awesome job =)

Ari chan

*thoughtful*
Well...
Er...
Good.

Wow that was really good. Its been a while since I´ve seen that episode as well but I thought it was pretty true to what happened and really good. I hope you write more soon.

I'm liking it, very good! Well, written emotions!

Least it was good angst! Kenshin/Kaoru all the way! Keep writing!

this story was very well written good details in scenery and emotion

WOW! this is SO well written! you know, this is REALLY, REALLY good! (especially for your first fic!) i hope you continue to write, and you know what? i think this is going to go on my favorites list.

oh... your use of language... oh sublime... would you prefer burnt offering or fervent prayer?