Reviews for When Peter met Clark

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Pretty Panda 2006-07-11 ch 10,	abuseI would like for Chloe and Peter remain as friends. I don't really go for the whole Chole/Peter thing since they seems to fit for friends than the relationship.
RedKaddict 2006-05-08 ch 12,	abuseSoon? SOON?! Sure, if you call... glances at last update date ...two years soon... You have to continue this! I must know what happens next! Please? Please? Oh, and so I don't sound too "demanding": I think you're a very talented writer, and I really enjoyed reading this story. Everything was well written, and the only problems I could find were most likely just typos. You describe everything so well, and you know how to keep the readers in suspense and how to keep the plot running smoothly. And I'm very serious about all that. It's not a joke, really. I meant every word! ~Red
JanAlex 2005-07-06 ch 12,	abuseJust found your story and read it all (to this point - ch. 12) in one sitting. Great crossover. I spotted a continuity error however... you indicated that Mark's wife died giving birth to his daughter (a fact she still blames herself for - ch. 7)then had said mother teaching her about roses and gardening etc. (ch.10). I liked the garden imagery and forshadowing, so I think I'd have Mama expire by some other senseless method for character development. She (doesn't have a name that we know of...) seems to have the hots for a fellow student who rescued her. We are to suppose that it is either Peter or Clark, because either of them would have had the reflexes to be a hero at school when she fainted, but if it was Peter, the senseless death of her mother is an interesting comparison point, although he wouldn't know where the hospital is located. If it is Clark, well, it will be interesting to see if Peter has to save him. Hm... either fellow would make a great energy source for the little lady. I'm very interested to see where you take this story.
The Cure 2004-10-06 ch 10,	abuseUm, I think I would like to see Chole and Peter together...thanks. Awesome story, keep it up! Chocolate oranges and Jesus loves you -Liane (meb)
Comics Girl 2004-08-21 ch 12,	abuseCOME BACK AND FINISH THIS STORY!NOW! IT IS AWSOME!
Lady Russell Holmes 2004-08-10 ch 12,	abuseSBob, you haven't updated this in a long time. What's up?
Lenore Raven 2004-07-02 ch 12,	abusei like, i like ALOT! but it seems as though you haven't updated in a while, though i am just discovering your fiction i demand an update imediatly! don't give me any crap about "writer block" just update! luv much LenoreRaven *sorry, i forgot to mention that i was bipolar? i cannot be held accountable for my suddent bursts of rage YOU STUPID LAZY AUTHOR! once again, sorry
Spadde 2004-06-07 ch 12,	abuseC'mon, buddy! You gonna update?
XxDark Aura016xX 2004-03-24 ch 12,	abuseAthough I am one who would strongly opose to a Cloe/Peter pairing it seems clear now about the decision on that matter. Also on the other hand insted of making Cloe die you could make her almost die. but I think the story would be more interesting if you do make the pairing I mentioned earlier that Cloe then dies. you know what I meen. As you probably have guessed by now that im usually one for ending that involve good defeating bad but always sort of a "persons close dies and now the hero is ingulfed in self guilt and is deeply depressed" and now (to your relief no doubt) im finally going to shut up and let you write your story the way you want but I still am against that pairing! sincerely XxDark Aura016xX
Ishkabod 2004-03-16 ch 12,	abuseah the suspence is torture. Love the story and what i see developing is very well thought out. This is one crossover that i'd like to see again. and if you havent gotten a bad review yet i'll give you one in the next chapter mwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha to keep you in suspence as to what i'll write :p and in return for a speedy next chapter i'll be sure to keep you on my author alert list and yes that is a threat (kidding)
Spadde 2004-02-21 ch 3,	abusewow. When i first read the summary of this story I thought "You can't mix Spiderman and Superman!" I stand corrected. Im only one the 3rd chapter and im lovin it!
Doppleganger33 2004-02-17 ch 12,	abuseThis story seems to be heating up. I wonder what Lionel Luthor has in store for Peter. I bet you his little brat will plan something soon too.
dutchtulips 2004-01-20 ch 12,	abuseWhoa, how'd I miss the new chapter? Well, finally I found it! ;-) Great agonizing cliffhanger for the twelfth chapter! I can only guess what's in store for Peter when Lionel Luthor is involved. (God, I wish he would just die on the T.V. show.) Looks like Clark's gonna try to save him, but since Peter's got powers too, who knows... except for you, of course. LOL. ;-) Kudos!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
qwerty 2004-01-20 ch 12,	abusespider man in a tux nice, James bond eat you're heart out. dude you are sick in the head. but good story however.
supergirlhv 2004-01-18 ch 12,	abuseooh, me like. me definitely like! i'm so glad you finally updated! can't wait to see what lionel does. update quickly ^_^

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