aww it's complete...there has to be a a next series or something

whoaa...are u sure this is finished...cuz i'm really curious as to what happens next.

Good story i not one for taiora stories but this one sounded intersting its good so far so keep working on it well goodluck! ;)

yay! It's back!! I'm wondering if Jennilyn and Matt would get together XDD pls update soon, i just got bak from vacation :)

i definitely gotta say that im liking it! its different... update!

hn... interesting..getting a little strange.. but..

ok.. that was interesting... um..their reactions seemed a little neutral... like, they took it too well, i mean... it's like... not natural...

oh, very interesting =)

ooh, very interesting.. but i wasn't confused cause i read the summary...
hmm , i wonder what will happen =)

wow..that was really sad... hm.. i like it =)
ha, a typicalt yamato thing to do... if, ofcourse, the situation you described were to happen.
even though i know this story's on hold, i'm putting this on my favourites, and i'm putting you on my favourites because this is the second story you authored that has gone to my favourites list =)
(hmm, that's kindof my rule.. but i dosen't apply to certain things, as in, authors or stories...)

Sorry for the late review, I just got back from two weeks away. What do I say? I've said it all already! But gosh, what about Jennilyn. Is it something to do with M?? No, don't tell me!!
Erm, why do you keep writing = s, is it some sort of code?

EEK! Update quick! i have to know what happens!

This rocks. It's incredibly original and believable. If you don't continue Raphael (from Soul Calibur II) and I will comandeer the Enterprise-J and make you continue. (translation: this story is incredible)

Oh my gosh, I can't believe that Jennilyn's going to be in the hospital. Please do not keep me in suspense and UPDATE SOON!! Jaa ne, PrincesakuraTenshi12^.^

Uh oh. Now what's wrong with Jen? Update soon!