 si3nna 2007-04-27 . chapter 1Your story is stil going...
B-But do I see the lack of updates? D: *pokes*
Love triangles are good...although Lee's POV just killed my brain...8D
btw its surrealistic :P |
 Taisa Ayase 2004-12-30 . chapter 1CONTINUE*pause, gasps* E! |
 nightmares of death 2004-07-27 . chapter 2erm i think the html has to be capitalized and itll work other than that i liked the fic although the ""es" kinda confused me |
 Seishounohana 2004-06-26 . chapter 2hm... the html is quite a bad thing... okay... er... so... aside from that... good work! ^_^ i'll read your fic! |
 Astly-Hina-chan 2004-06-18 . chapter 2Nice story. I think your trying to put this to html process but it didn't work and it's confusing. But I still read it since I'm so interested in this kind of love triangle! |
 weirddramagirl 2004-06-09 . chapter 2intresting story so far, please write more! |
 Raiden123 2004-03-10 . chapter 2First off, why is this in HTML form (or mostly)? Took me a while to notice. That's another thing. Why do you say toke when it's took?
Anyway, very nice ending, please add new chapters (please not html form) :0 |
 SoulSearcherSaku 2004-01-01 . chapter 2yay! I likey! keep writing! NaruxHina is the best! |
 Canelle 2003-10-03 . chapter 2Hinata will die?!
NO! please, powerful Writer!
don't do this!
A fight between Naruto and neji for Hinata, sounds interresting ^_^.
But formating of 2d chapter is bad... |
 tiramisuNyaaanx3 2003-09-30 . chapter 2I LUV UR STORY! its just dat um...change ur writing style with da paragraphs and quotes, cause its hard 4 me 2 reed ok...im not against u or anything like dat ok. i just wanted 2 say dat ok...well...
Bye make a reelly good chapter! |