Hi there. I know that this story is old now, But I stubbled upon it a few days ago. And I have to say that I really enjoy it. And when I read that you where not going to be writeing much more I grew sad. I hope you can reconsider finshing this story. I really love it.

It's okay if characters die (Didn't Ovelia die already in the game or something?), just not Ramza or Alma, most probably. Anyway, great story! Update soon!

It's okay if characters die (Didn't Ovelia die already in the game or something?), just not Ramza or Alma, most probably. Anyway, great story! Update soon!

Man, this fic is good. Always great when a decent FFT comes out, and this one is shaping up to be really great. Lots of creativity and originality. Keep up the good work!

I'm impressed that you updated so quickly. I hope that you suprise me again.

Oh, I forgot to mention this but...

He reminded her so much of her father, Sir Oaks the Brave, a Houkten Knight killed in the “Fifty Year War”.

Finally! Someone who thinks that Agrias comes from a noble family! (...Well, I hope you think that.) You don't know how relieved I was when I read that part. It seems most people believes that Agrias came from a common family or somewhat equivalent to it. I was beginning to think I was the only one who thought she was originally from a noble family... Thank you! At least I know that I'm not alone! ^^

Hmm... What can I say? First off, there are a few grammatical errors here and there, the most glaring one (to me anyway) is the spelling of Hokuten. You spelled it Houkten. Just switch the u and the k around and you should be fine. The other glaring error is the spelling of steak, which should be stake. Steak is a food while stake is a wooden post. So it should be 'burnt at the stake'. (Yes, I'm a spelling nut.)

As for the story itself, I can't really judge much cause it's just a recap of what their lives are after the battle with Altima. It doesn't really say much about the plot, but I'm guessing you'll remedy that soon with your next chapter. And as far as couples go, it's your story, as you said, so use whatever couples you want.

Hmm. Reviewing to m'self real quick, just checking to see if the review bot still works. It didn't last time and I missed out on ten reviews. Anyway, hopefully next time I check I won't be the only one. ^_- *Hint hint*

I hope that this is a Ramza/Agrias fic those are usally really good. I can't wait until the next update.