Reviews for The Jewels of Four

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Mistress DragonFlame 2008-03-22 ch 4,	abuseUgh. English names for some, and Japanese for others. Like skittles and m&ms. But, whatever. This is interesting. I feel kinda bad for Bakura, though, probably being all by himself who knows where. I question the extremely large gap between the most recent up-date, and it's starting point, and yet the fact that there is only four chapters. Less then one a year, on average. One more thing; while there is over six hundred thousand words in the English language, each has a different meaning, and invoke something different, denoting something specific. So profanity, while not necessarily necessary (xD pun!), has it's own place.
IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2008-01-24 ch 4,	abuseNotice also that Inuyasha gets vetoed a lot as well?
IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2008-01-24 ch 2,	abuseHave you ever notice that though Inuyasha does make a scene, Kagome makes it bigger when she's trying to stop it?
IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2008-01-24 ch 3,	abuseKikyo playing with is not smart.
IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abusegeez Your writing is so proper Gema J. Gall-sempai. So I'll try to give you the same. Though I'm not a Writing Major ... Well over all I like the progression of the chapter. As well as the concept of such a story, and what it implies. Though when I read that first thought from Kagome regarding the shards, I think it should be worded differently. The sentence being (well really two sentences). "We now have the last shard...one in Kohaku, two in Kouga...and the rest with Naraku. So we'll have to be really careful now..." It states that they have the last shard. Which would imply that they have they have them all. So Kohaku wouldn't have one, Kouga wouldn't have two, and Naraku wouldn't have the rest. Maybe use something like this instead: "The last of the shards we nor Naraku have yet to collect, are the one in Kohaku and the two in Kouga. So we'll have to be really careful now..." If I'm wrong please tell me.
Fox of the Fallen 2007-12-08 ch 16,	abuseUpdate soon and I'll review ya later, Okay? Buh-bye!
t recorder 2007-08-20 ch 16,	abusethat was so sweet and thanx you for not cussing its not right and being a chirstain my self must be hard for other people to respect that... go for you and i love you storys they are great and inuyasha and yu-gi-oh are my two favorites but with school and yu-gi-oh being over i can't watch it much [i hate yugioh gx its a mocery to the first] any way please update this tottaly roxs
Yumiko-Hime 2007-01-21 ch 16,	abusehey i joined this site so i could comment on ur story XD it's great... have you thought about putting any romance in it? maybe between Yami Bakura and Sango? nothing mushy but a spark maybe... that would be interesting... they can simpathise with eachother... both lost they entire village... anyways i'm looking forward to the next part P.S. sorry if i spell anything wrong...
DeathNoteMaker 2006-12-20 ch 1,	abuse0_o whoa i knew he was stupid but he has just taken it to a new level.
Hale Jasper 2006-09-21 ch 1,	abuseAdding to favorites and C2.
Runelesca 2006-07-16 ch 16,	abuseWOW! Now this is interesting to say the least. I can't wait to see what'll be come of Koga. Or what'll happen to Sesshomaru. Wait will something happen to sesshoumaru? This is confusing.-_- Well either way update soon I can't wait to read more.^-^
Rutoh-Chan 2006-06-23 ch 16,	abuseI like story muchly. Any chance of an update soon?
phantom 2006-01-02 ch 16, anon.	abusethis is great I have no Idea what your conditions are, so I will wait for the next chapter good story. and your right why do people use profanity with sucha huge selection.
i dont list my name on the ... 2005-11-15 ch 16, anon.	abusegood theres not realy any thing to improve I know why you spell things wrong and its a good idea i do the same thing on my website anyway whens the next chapter coming out?
Roima the Dark Goddess 2005-11-05 ch 16,	abuseWhy haven't you updated yet?!?!?!!I'm tired of waiting here!

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