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Azamiko 2005-09-26 ch 17,	abuseThese are cool, I especially like YohxAnna...(my favorite pairings have little to do with whether they are het. or yaoi--or even yuri--, but whether I like the relationship, the way the charactes interact)...
Sullen Kitten 2004-08-23 ch 17,	abuseDrabble?
Tsu-Tsu the harpy-lady 2004-04-13 ch 17,	abuseI love the Mosuke-ness, there is NOT enough Mosuke-ness here or on the web. Thank you for contrbuting to the Mosuke-ness! ^^
Setsumi-san 2004-02-03 ch 17,	abuseOn #14:I think this is exactly what goes through Hao's mind a lot. He wants his brother to understand his philosophy so desperately. On #15: You know, I think that if I ever try to write a Lyserg centered fic in the future I need only study the way you write his personality like you did here. Most people portray him as melodramatic or whiny, but not you. You've got his cool vigilante attitude down pat. On #16: I'm not sure, but I'm guessing this takes place just after Yoh is killed by Hao. I think Anna was only acting tough on the outside because she knew she had to. If I were to write an introspective piece during that scene I would make her seethe with determined anger and a touch of sadness rather than automatically push Yoh's death aside and go on smoothly. On #17: Mosuke's wonderfully in-character here. I have only one itty bitty nitpick: the colon after "though." Digressing from that, I love the adjective,"purgatory." Lovely work. ^_^
Hermonthis 2004-02-01 ch 13,	abuseCool, I'm enjoy reading this. Keep it up.
shirayuri 2004-01-25 ch 13, anon.	abusetoo lazy to sign in So pretty. If I were to sum up your work in one word, it would be pretty. Or beautiful. Or lovely.
Setsumi-san 2004-01-23 ch 13,	abuseNumber 12 was fluffy and cute, just the way I like 'em. As for number 13, I got a good, clear picture in my head. It was a pleaseant image to think about. ^_^ Very nice.
da*mouse 2004-01-23 ch 12, anon.	abuseyou know that i love every single one of the bits and pieces you have here, right? ^_^ the lyserg drabble is wonderful, but so sad cos we all know what happens to his mum. concentrate = making sense, does it really now? :) yoh/anna, hey, since when do i say no to any of those? hehehe. anyway, i do love this piece. it portrays yoh so clearly in so little words. he's dripping wet with heavy bags and he still finds himself worrying for her because she has a cold. that's so...yoh. kudos. for moonlight watlz...again a poigant piece. guess that tamao's feelings for yoh would never really be reciporated. i like the part about him being "beyond her" but still...she wants to please him. ah...unrequited love. >_< great going! i salute you for being able to put so much meaning into 100 words. :) mouse
Silvianoshei 2003-11-05 ch 10,	abuseThese little blurbs are pretty cool. Hope you make more!
Setsumi-san 2003-10-14 ch 10,	abuseNumber nine was nice. Who doesn't love just staring at the clouds like that?
da-mouse 2003-10-14 ch 10,	abusetwo new vignettes - totally great ones. ^_^ for the yoh/anna one...it's just a fleet, brief and sweet everyday moment that the two of them encounters once in a while. the brief interaction [talk other than training and more training, hah] is just lovely. for the ryu/lyserg one...i am not a fan of this pairing, but nevertheless, that's some pretty deep writing there. ^_^ and lighthearted, i presume, hehe. ryu cooking is just like ryu. :) looking forward to another few 100-word drabbles! ja, mouse-chan
da*mouse 2003-10-14 ch 8, anon.	abuseme like these series heaps, HEAPS. each and everyone of them is enjoyable in their own way and meaningful to boot, yea...especially 'glade pact', haha, love Yoh/Anna to pieces. Have to commend you on 'thimble' and 'shame' - two pieces of fiction that actually made me see hao and jeanne in a new light - a couple! possible! probable! likable! yay! so yeah, keep going, keep going...i'll keep reading. ^_^ ja, mouse-chan
Chibi Team Rocket 2003-10-08 ch 8,	abuseOMG! Manta! ;.; Yoh has you~
Setsumi-san 2003-10-05 ch 8,	abuseThat Mantou one was too cute. ^_^ Poor Yoh-kun, he's as confused with computers as Ren is. Just a little side-note: You might want to up the rating for those extra friendly Hao/Jeanne scenes. I know it's not too detailed but it does exceed PG with the mood and all.
Katreda 2003-10-05 ch 5,	abusehey, makes your chapters longer.. it's really too short, with all the five chaps, you could do just one

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