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A Single Black Rose 2005-05-19 ch 1,	abusePlz don't tell me this is a one-shot story, case this story would be great with a few more chapters.It's already great but it's kind of hanging of. Ella
EternusLemures 2005-05-08 ch 1,	abuseAww...how sweet. I don't know whether I should say add another chapter or not because it would be interesting seeing how their relationship would progress but still, the story as it is has an air of fantasy that makes me feel happy just reading it. It really is quite cute. I like it . on a scale from one to ten, one being the worst and ten the best, I'd say a twenty. it was exceptionally written, especially for a one shot. I hope you update your other stories soon, especially Red String of Fate. I'll be looking forward to it all! Ja ne Sayonara and ta ta. ~EL
sun-melon 2005-02-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI live a half hour away from toronto, and I've been down younge street and seen all you've described. This is great, lol
kunthea 2005-01-06 ch 1, anon.	abusewow! love this story. well i finished one of your stories again. this is such a wonderful story. i mean the descriptions of everything that involved in this story amazingly detailed, especially the nature surrounding them. and what's a nice reply to sesshoumaru's question. this is a great story.
Kasiree 2004-11-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseContinue this story, or I will no longer be a fan of yours anymore. Which is a hard task, might I add! Please, oh, please! It's a must! A MUST, DAMN IT! threatens you by creating a slight rip with her Cappie shirt Oh, no! Look what you made me do! sobs
HellsChiled 2004-08-05 ch 1,	abuseI really hope that this story will not be a One-shot for long 'cause I really like this story. It's grate!
Pluie d'ete 2004-07-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story is so beautiful. I love it! Especially since ilive in Toronto. This fic reminds me the movie Lost in Translation. Contrary to the others, i think you should just leave this story as it is. I believe it is comeplete already. there is the promise, or even the possibility of something betwen Sess and Kag, but it is not fulfilled yet. It leave the reader to think about what may happen later. Please don't continue it, this story is very unique right now. Your story is very thought provoking and makes me think about it after, unlike most stories i read. I love your writing style.
Aphiopsyduck 2004-04-07 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful story. If this ever turns into more than a one-shot, I hope to read it. :o)
Ayare 2004-01-09 ch 1,	abuseI really want to see how this one turns out.
Massao-na-Mizu 2003-12-09 ch 1,	abusei read this before but i guess i forgot to review... will you ever forgive me? i wanted to say that it was a lovely story and is such a shame if you don't continue it... and this is my dreamfic cometrue! actually, in a sense because i was thinking (so long ago) to make something a bit similar but sesshoumaru was Kagome's childhood crush and she thought that sess is the one to be married or anything... sighs oh well... i'm just wondering... where is toronto? this is the first time i've heard of the place mentioned. or is this just a madeup name for the place? shrugs me don't know. if no one have asked to continue it, then may i please ocntinue it when i celebrate my first year in writing? or when i'm good enough? please? ^_^
SimplyTurquoise 2003-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI read it... I'm reviewing it... and now I'm going to say 'ufu ufu'(whatever taht may mean?!!?)
SeruleanOrbs 2003-10-28 ch 1,	abuseWhen are you writing the next chappie, cappie? I will always remember you by that name. [u changed it right?] I love it already. But that's no surpirse. I like your works. Please let me know when you continue on with this fic. I really liked how you opened the story. ^.^
erin 2003-10-28 ch 1, anon.	abusei like this chapter... IMHO is very melancholic and well waffy of sorts
Twiliblossom 2003-10-08 ch 1,	abusegreat, hope you keep going
shina-schatten 2003-10-06 ch 1,	abuseOnce again you have created a masterpeice. I visited Toronto this last march and i think i know which church you are talking about, it does have a very peaceful atmosphere. This was very well done and while i love your longer pieces i think leaving it as a stand alone one shot will work quite nicely, although a sequel will always be welcomed. thank you for this beautiful peice. ya ne ~shina~

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