wow so much hate. its like psychology and life. there is no right or wrong. everyones sides are baised...maybe. i like tristans best. and i dislike ryous the most. disgusting.. he doesnt even try. its all or nothing and he just likes the middle. D: this could definitely confuse one and make them go insane trying to figure out whos right here.

I like this - it's really deep. Its also really sad, how each of them is slightly disillusioned about the other two, even if Honda seems to be the one who is most in the dark of all three. Good work!
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Great writing! I love the rhythm of the three chapters. It almost adds a lyrical quality to it. Why will Yami Bakura kill his other half? Does he love him at all?

Wow, that was...dark. _ Well written and insightful as hell, but very very dark. Scary. And sad, how hopeless it was, and the way they are all just...going on with it, even though all of them hate it. I liked it a lot. Which probably says something about how twisted I am. Ah, the angst!

This was wonderful too. Often, people portray the Ryou/Bakura relationship as a loving one. You have caught both Bakura's malelvolence and Ryou's hopelessness wonderfully, as well as their twisted bond. It was very moving.

I just wanted to say that it was great, really breathtaking actually. When I saw the summary, I was a little bit dubious about how you were going to portray Ryou as everyone (me included) makes him too accepting, too nice. I especially like the way you portrayed him. The whole relationship was really fascinating though.

Wow

Wow. Excellent and creative; where'd you come up with the idea? I love how we get introduced to even more sides as the story progresses; it really illustrates the mind-filter concept. Nice work!

whoa. that was intense! it's cool how u wrote for all three of their thoughts on the same topic. great job!

An intrigueing read, credible and touching, with a strong impact. I like the way you had Tristan exprience the yami/hikari bonds between Ryou and his yami.