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| estrellegoddess 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, very cute, also really sad |
| Meghan Elizabeth 2001-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI wanted to give you feedback when this was posted to ASC, but life got a little crazy and I didn't. I think this story, like all of the other stories of yours that I've read, definitely has potential, it just needs some fine tuning. I don't mean to plug my own interests, I really do enjoy your stories, but if you're interested, I run a Star Trek Beta-Reading Service @ www.geocities.com/Area51/Dreamworld/1481. You're welcome to stop by and visit us, but you're not obligated to:-) |
| Anna 2000-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting story - I think if Lena really loves him, she should try to stay with him instead of asking him to come away with her. What do you think? Could make an interesting sequel. ;-) |