Reviews for The Second Stallion

Reviews For: The Second Stallion - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

Vilkath 2007-06-10 ch 4,	abuseNot to bad, but like all your stories you have a fair start, with bunch questions and no explinations. Then you just stop writing the fic.
unknown 2006-07-18 ch 4, anon.	abuseThe first time I read this story it was Nov 2003. Iv been checking up on it once in a while and there hasnt been another update since the last one and its been years since then and there hasent been one single update in years. Its a good story so far and I know you have a life to but why are you not updating this? Me and other people have been waiting a long time for the next one. Are you not writing this anymore or what? I hope you will keep writing this because its really good. please update soon and tell us if your going to keep going with this or not. Its a good story and I encurage you to please keep writing and finish it. oh and please dont give ranma any curses there is to much of that already and this story does not need ranma to have any curses. Thank you
Dumbledork 2006-02-23 ch 4,	abuseJust discovered this fic and it's really great. Bringing together two of my absolute favourite manga/anime series is a dream come true. I hope that you'll still continue updating this story, although it has been over a year. Here are some ideas I think would be great to add to the story. 1) The curse. Definitely female (be it human, demon, mermaid or whatever) as I think that's one element that musn't be changed in any Ranma fic as it is the main element of the Ranma story. 2) Ranma should get two cloths. One for his female side and one for his male one. That could lead to many funny moments especially if he's splashed with water during a fight. 3) There shouldn't be too many women after him because I think that there are too many in the original Ranma story. 4) Ranma shouldn't join Athena's group but rather work alone (like Ikki). 5) As for pairings I'd go with Shaina as I think she'd be the best choice for Ranma.
KH 2005-11-25 ch 4, anon.	abuseyo..crazy guy...when you're going to update dammit!
Saini Casina 2005-11-12 ch 4, anon.	abuseI'm really enjoying this fic. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter.
ChaosRune 2005-11-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis is an exellent fanfic, I really like the way this is going, also I'm really curious of the Cloth that you are going to give Ranma, obviously it's going to be something related with the Pegasus Clothe, maybe the Stallion's Clothe? or maybe another Pegasus Clothe, or maybe something completely different. About the curse, I don't think it's necessary, and besides, with how much he has lost already (the Pegasus Clothe, his master), that would be too much for him right now
Rignach 2005-11-11 ch 4,	abuseIt has been a while since this one got a new chapter. It would nice to know with mantle Ranma will get if he will ever get one and what was in the pool?
ZenAku 2005-08-17 ch 4, anon.	abusePlease update soon and put WINGS to Ranma's Cloth
dragon-game 2005-04-03 ch 4,	abuseGood story. Please update soon.
richard 2004-12-08 ch 4, anon.	abuseupdate update update.
Gopu 2004-12-01 ch 4, anon.	abuseGood chapter.
taxzombie 2004-12-01 ch 4,	abuseI don't recall what your original first chapter was like, I only recall that after reading three chapters I was hopelessly confused and had given up, hence my review of chapter 3. Having read the new chapter 1 the story makes more sense. It still leaves me, a non-saint Seiya viewer in the dark much of the time but it did have enough elements I was either comfortable, or familular with to make it more readable. As it now stands I still am pretty much in the dark as to just who these characters are and why they are beating the hell out of each other - to the point of trying to kill each other - but I am curious about this second 'mantle'? that it appears Ranma has found at the bottom of the cursed pool of saint ?. So for now I'm striking France's second national flag (i.e. a white flag) and I'm going to give this story at least another chapter or two worth of reads. But in the meantime I'm going to hit google so I that I can hopefully get some background on Saint Seiya.
Unoviento 2004-12-01 ch 4, anon.	abuseThere are not Ranma-Saint Seyia fanfics on the net, well i seem to remember one but not where. I hope u get on with this one becasue i like it. Continue ok.. don´t leave us like this... Unoviento
Trent Rayner 2004-12-01 ch 4,	abuseGreat chapter, I can't wait for the next one and finally know which Cloth are you giving Ranma. It will be interesting to know if he ends up with either Seika or Shaina, though I still think it will be better if it is Shaina. Another thing, Seika IS metion around the second or third chapter(Can't remember precisely) in the Anime when Seiya ask Saori about her, not only in the Hades Saga. That was the main reason he enter the Galactic Challenge. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Jason 2004-12-01 ch 4, anon.	abusegreat chapter, keep up the great work.

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