WOOHOO! That was great!

And yes, he does look very sexy with the blood XD

Wow! What a story , well she really shouldn't be laughing this time because she set him up. What the hell is she thinking when she set him up very badly and she expects everything she does she thinks that she is going to get away with what she did ohh I don't think so . Besides she got what she deserves for treating him in such way that she did . Poor Sands ... I hope he can get some eyes to fill his empty eye sockets and make him look more better.

Man, is she a **!

wow...I almost feel sorry for her now...almost
*applauds* very well written, I loved it ^_^
*looks around* no more OUATIM fics? T__T
I'll be waiting for more...face it, you've got me hooked
Harley

Suprise suprise - another great story! My god that chick is EVIL! Gr. YOu are really good at getting into peoples train of thought - which makes your stories very realistic.

awesome. she's such a royal biznatch.

my fave quote: "He is in pain, and the blood on his face is incredibly sexy. She has never wanted him as badly as she does now." ah, so i am not the only one who felt that way... heh heh

~ep41

OUATIM finally has it's own category! I don't know if you need to move your story yourself or if ff.net'll do it for you, but I thought I'd let you know.
-Merrie.

Good for her! Betraying Sands trust like she did deserves what she got! God I really sound like I should shoot her myself O_O

anyway... I really like your writing! Makes me think I really should go and watch OUATIM for a second time (yes I'm ashamed... I've only seen it once... poor student that I am :S)

Nice. very nice. I always thought Sands was the insane one, really. I never really thought of Ajedrez this way. Shes a spoiled ** ent she? I like the way you put that out there. She's used to gettng what she wants and she'll do anything for it.
'He always hates it when she calls him that.'
I like that. She is so sure of herself.
Well done! *claps*

Bravo...it's real neat that you can get into her mind like that. I always have trouble when I try to write as anyone other than a neutral narrator.

wow! that was awesome!! a little look into Ajedrez's head...very interesting...gotta say, you are definitely a talented writer! you should write some more OUATIM fanfics coz you write the characters very well!

Great story.
Well done, you seem to get into loads of peoples heads real well!
uh oh...*runs away screaming with hands over ears*
NO STAY OUT! NO!

(Sorry, too much caffine)

EVIL.. EVIL..EVIL.. SHE IS EVIL INCARNATE!!

WOW.. VERY POWERFUL insit into her head.. creepy too.. good to know she's ever so much more evil than Sands. There we were thinking Sands was so awful, now, we have a new basis for comparision. By that comparison, Sands is a choir boy.

*shivers* Ok, do you feel like you need to get a shower and wash off all the slime you feel after digging around in her head? I know I need one..

Great story..

Oh.. and thanks for the PoTC script!!

'ta

Yay, more 'Mexico' fic!
As usual, realistic, and about one of the most underappreciated, yet one of the most important characters in the film. Bravo again!

That was so cool! The only reason I read it was b/c of your other story, but I really liked this one too.