I've got to say, your story made me cry . . . I just loved it so much. Poor Kurtis! :(

;)

Wow. Finally finished reading this!

I'll admit there were points when I was like 'when do these questions END?!' and I found a bit of it a little repetitive but I gotta say, you have an INCREDIBLE imagination! I mean just the concept of him being part nephilim and there being good nephilim - I LOVED it! It goes deep! ;)

Also loved the ending - it was sweet, and perfect.

Great story! Job well done!

OMG! That was an amazing story!

Just started your story!! Damn it's long! But I love it cause I always complain that stories aren't long enough. I'm only on Chapter 10 but I'm lovin it so far. I hope Lara and Kurtis get together. Their a great pair!

Oh boy, a wonderful story is finished now... how could this happen?

You are an excellent writer, Jaarli! I love your style! And your story was just brilliant!
Only... what happens to Lara and Kurtis now? I miss the "... and they lived happily ever after" (are those words correct?) ;)

I am really looking forward to reading another of your wonderful stories!

Silver

Whoo hoo! *bounce* That was GREAT, Lotts! I'm so prod of you!

This was such a thoughtful, well-written, wonderfully characterised story. The only thing wrong with is was no Lara/Kurtis smoochies!

*huggle* I'd say when's the sequel, but I don't want you to die of exhaustion... WELL DONE!

I am very sorry that the story has ended.
Atleast one more chapter. I bumped to finding the trail of THIS story jaarli. Just start writing another story. Can't wait.

Wow! A beautiful ending to a truly epic story. Everything seemed to come together very nicely. Bitter-sweet, and yet laced with a lot of truth.
Loved the line - "In this world nothing lasted forever"
Thank you for a most excellent read.
Linzi

very nice! Excellent chapter, and you describe action scenes well! Keep it up but update a little sooner.

Ooh, good chapter...and a cliffhanger as well!
I like the idea of Kurtie creeping around using his powers...and what's going to happen next?
Keep going *poke*

"Lara was probably too stubborn to die in a tomb..." LOL! Right on :)

creepy... a dark misty shadow with red eyes... damn, did I lock my door? It is dark outside, what is that... are there two red dots over there? Shiver...

:)
CU next chapter
Silver

Wow, very interesting story! And I like your style!
I am looking forward to your next update!

CU
Silver

Yay! you finally updated. LOL. Great chapter I loved it. Please update soon. I mean seriously you took forever. Ok no hard feelings. Keep going. It was great.

I love this story! I love the way things are described here, don't make me ( a new member) wait too long. I am waiting for more.

Hey, just thought I'd say how much I love this story. I think it was one of the first AOD fics I ever read and is definitely one of my favourites. :)
Please update this story soon, I'm always very glad to see when a new chapter has been posted!