j:THIS CHAPTER WAS GREAT!IS THERE GONNA BE A CHAPTER 7?


n:...!yeah!IS THERE GONNA BE A CHAPTER 7,I'M CURRIOUS!


(the other review was a mistake so don't read it because it only has one word.)

J:This

J:They kissed after the fight but it would sound better if Jakotsu was a girl. (no defense)



N:Well a little awkard but I agree with J.

j:i liked it but i can't believe how hot Bankotsu is!!


n:wel whoop ti do!!

In the begginig Jakotsu was walking through Mt. Hakurai."Man why does it have to be so uncomfortable around here."Jakotsu said in a sigh.Her mission was to find Inuyasha's older brother.His name is Sesshomaru.Then finally she found him walking with his two comrads.A little girl and small demon that look like a preacher.He didn't look as cute as Inuyasha did."They were right about him being OLDER."Jakotsu muttered.She was hiding so he wouldn't see her.Luckily he didn't actually sense her."I sense grave yard soil."Immediately she ran.Forgot to mention that she was resserected by this half demon named Naraku and so was the rest of her brothers.
"That was a close one."Jakotsu sighed in relief.


TO BE CONTINUED...



SORRY EVERYONE THIS JUST A SMALL STORY I MADE

AWW! KAWAII! I LOVE THIS STORY! 'cept it has only kissing...*tear* Oh WELL! Cute anyway. XD I love this yaoi couple uberly so. =3

i hope you update soon! ^_^
awsome story! i got so happy at the end! XD

I started reading this last night & it was really good I would love to continue, but chapters 2 & 3 are unreadable due to spacing issues. You need to go back & fix your spacing & re-upload. I wonder how many people were turned away because of it. ^^; Anyway, I'm putting this on alert just in case you do...
And just out of curiosity, did you have a gallery over at DA? Your penname sounds awfully familiar.

KAWAI -spazz-

Is it the end? I loved the fic! It was so cool! I noticed the story while going back in time through the jakotsu section... and it really made me hungry too! I feel like ramen...

--Yuri

WOW.. just wow.

can you p;ease put up another chapter and what will happen when the others find out and what will happen to them?

omg, this is crazy. my friend and I are starting a band too! we dont even have a name, but we have vocals, guitars and crap. e, yes, jakotsu can sing good! he can do anything except fly. i want to fly. C>C>C>C> *cries* WHY CANT I FLY?!?!?! yes, i am hyper. i just got a fundip. hehehhee...DONT LOOK AT ME THAT WAY!. okay, im done. awesome chapter!

oh, coolie! lol, i do just what Jade does when her name is called. I freak out. Now, my penname is a little obvious why its called that...eh...C>. omg, i love this story! hehee, i always get called on and my first words are: I didn't do it! so, thats why. hehe. love this chapter, love this story. im in a study hall class in school right now, so yeah. yep, my life is pretty much like jakotsu's with an exception of being gay, and I'm sat on sometimes... *SIGH* i love jakotsu.

Is this gonna be continued? Anyways, I loved the story,its kawaii, though, there are some mistakes, you said that Jakotsu was wearing a red gragon pin(or something) in his hair whaen he arrived, but then later on, you said it was blue, and it was kinda confusing during the first 3 chapters or so because you didn't sepperate your A/N from the story, butr I really like it!