 Pharaoh Kami 2004-06-09 . chapter 1 I like it! Kawaii! Anyway, um, Pharaoh Kami is my pen name, not my name, but for some reason ff.net isn't letting me sign in... |
 Pharaoh Kami 2004-06-09 . chapter 1 I like it! Kawaii! Anyway, um, Pharaoh Kami is my pen name, not my name, but for some reason ff.net isn't letting me sign in... |
 Hime no Ichigo 2003-10-19 . chapter 1So cute! *throws confetti into the air* Yeah, happy birthday, Yuugi! *gives him mysterious present* (inside joke, LOL) ^_~
Yuugi: ^_^ Thankies!
*glomps* You're welcome. Anyhoo, keep up the good work! I hope you really write a sequel soon..*poke poke* Well, are you? *waits patiently*
I'll be waiting~!
Keep up the good work and update soon!
~Hime no Ichigo~ |
 IchigoPocky 2003-10-16 . chapter 1 Hi, I got though about half of your fanfic until I got so annoyed with the little notes of you and your friend butting in to comment. Small notes that are few and far between are okay, but practically every time i'd scroll down the length of my screen, i'd see more comments. If you had 3 or 4 it'd be okay, but it ended up getting to the point where I didn't want to finish the fanfic because of your chattering. I was really looking forward to reading the story, unfortunetly I will not. You should seriously consider taking out the notes and then replacing it. If you do, please email me, for I wouldn't truly like to read this fanfic.
Remember Fanfiction means the story. Not your thoughts. If you want to squeal about the cuteness of the characters that should be done on forums, blogs, or user lookups. |
 Angelic Warrior 2003-10-08 . chapter 1 So...this was the fanfic that you guys were doing together...huh? Um...sorry but there's too much diologe in there. You guys talk so much in the story...and why abuse Anzu like that?
Read "Love Kalaidoscope" please...I think that's how you spell it...but it's in my favorite's list |
 Kumiho 2003-10-02 . chapter 1 Hey! Luv ur story~! Keep it up! |
 sapphire 2003-10-02 . chapter 1 a nice story - unfortunatly there was too much in the way of notes in the middle of the story - but was a nice story though |
 takuya 2003-10-02 . chapter 1that was a wired but cool story |
 RainOwl 2003-10-02 . chapter 1aw... thats SO cute^_^!!
very very very very very very VERY good!
Owl |