 firedraygon 2007-09-22 . chapter 1No, if you just waited 2 years you'd have seen him again, Cloud!!
Lovely fic. I like the emotion in this, especially when Cloud collects himself after killing Sephiroth and is all quietly overwhelmed. Excellent work.
~firedraygon97 |
 Melarik 2005-06-28 . chapter 1::Sniff:: wow...::dries tears, tossing empty tissue box on pile, stacked eight feet high:: that... was the s-sadest fic I've ever read... IT WAS AWE-SOME... the endign of the game would have been much better if this was the ending... ok maybe... You're really good at the details, gave me shivers. Intense reading
I ban writers block from your space And hope you update any/all of your stories with ease |
 inu382 2005-05-05 . chapter 1It's pretty sad (I know, I know, that's how it was supposed to be). It's really nice. |
 rachel 2005-02-07 . chapter 1 wow... you brought me to tears. i loved this. and i absolutely loved the last line... "Salvation given". This was really beautiful. thank you for this. |
 Nashidesei 2004-09-02 . chapter 1O_O Wow. This is intense. Absolutely amazing. It deserves so much more than the single review I can give it, so I'm going to try to make this count.
Admittedly, it was the content of the story that drew me in (I'm a SephirothxCloud maniac) but the writing style kept me reading it. It flowed wonderfully from word to word, phrase to phrase, with wonderful descriptions and a beautiful flavor.
You are an amazing writer - you do't normally write this kind of thing, you say, but you wrote this as though you had gone to college just to learn how to work out Sephiroth's dialect, how to word Cloud's phrases, how to describe the pain . . .
Amazing. Definitely a favorite. |
 pebi 2004-02-22 . chapter 1 Well THAT was angsty o_o; Slight angst does not cover it. XD;
And I relaly dunno what to say I'm kinda all "duhr" Because Court pulled it off so well. Court is cool. Court should get ego boosts more often. Court does not suck. Court's fic was nice |
 klytaemnestra 2003-10-02 . chapter 1MM ... beautiful angst. Very lovely. You conveyed the emotion so well. |
 Rydia Highwind 2003-10-01 . chapter 1DAMN YOU, CHILD, MAKING ME CRY LIKE THAT. ::grabs Cloud, throws him in a bag, and runs away with him:: HA. MINE NOW! ::cackles as Cloud escapes from bag and runs off with Zack:: ... |