very humorous. I like the plan that you gave Serena, I myself would have never thought of that.

i just wanted to say that UR STORY WAS AWESOME ! that was great, r u going to put up another chapter after that? oh i hope u will, email me if u will ok ?

Cute and funny

Pretty good!

Mina-chan

dat was cool

so good & cute ...so sugary & cinnamony... *_*

Nice

LOL That was GREAT! That was classic! lol I can just imagine the look on Darien's face as Serena's walking away from him. heehee Whooo! Go, Serena! Lucky, LUCKY girl! So whoever SAID she was stupid, ne? _

lol, dat wuz funnie

THis is cute! I dunno why they didn't think of that earlier...

Hey I like that. Short but funny and to the point. If you have anymore like that send them to me will ya. Maybe you should give Darien some lines though , in the end ya know. Put them together But Serena having guts like that is funny.:)

Mindy aka Usagi

So, So, SOOOO funny! *cracks up* You MUST keep writing, girl!

Not bad, and sorta funny.

LOL! That was great! Bravo!

That was cute!