Orlando Bloom with eyeliner. Gee, that's a scary thought. Good one, mate.

*I don't know if she should believe him or not. But I do know that this was a great chapter and I really want you to update soon.

I love your story!

Hey Elwyn! Seriously, your story is getting better and better with each chapter! You got talent girl! Keep it up, and I hope to be able to see your next chapter soon...

~Forchuse~

*hook...*

El, you ROCK! This is one of the best stories I've read! Now that you've got me hooked however, you have to keep posting so I'm not left hanging... I also agree with the others that...

YOU DO NOT SUCK AT ROMANCE! You're doing a great job! Keep it up and keep posting!

(Tadeln es auf Batterton... you know what I mean)

Aw, you don't suck at romance! It's cute! And I like how you haven't made it a typical "They loved each other since their eyes first met". See, I have no will power so my fics ALWAYS end up that way, but I like that Jack doesn't actually love Anamaria. It makes things more suspenseful lol! I really liked Elizabeth and all her thinking too. I do that sort of thing all the time, think of one then thing, then another, then another, then suddenly the answer to the riddle is there and you have no idea if it's the right answer or not because it hit you so suddenly.
*Ahem* Sorry, went off on one there a bit. Lol! Anyway, yeah, you can probably tell that I still love this as much as ever! Update when you can chick! Love ya hun! *lotsa big huggles*
Silva x X x X x

You know things that take thinking to read usually don't catch me (if that makes any sense. It probably doesn't but whatever) But when he said no to her he was still drunk so he might not mean that. Stop letting me ramble! Okay I have to go take a hit, or a shot whichever one comes first.

This story is so incredibly awsome! I love it! Please update the next chapter soon...I'm enjoying myself a whole lot! This story is worth fancying. *wink*

i love it!! keep it up! go jack sparrow! er.. *captain* jack sparrow!! =)

Okay please tell me that you are planning on completing this story?

Short, but acceptable.Pretty good,but you gotta make your chapters longer in the future.Savvy?Anyhow,make sure to ask me if I've read a chapter before showing me the one AFTER that.It gets confuzzling after all.
Since,you're right over my shoulder,I'll say that it was cute.
Curse you, scum

Hey Em-
Really great.Not bad for someone writing this at seven o'clock at night.Lol.You're hilarious. But keep on writing, I'm waiting for the next chapter,so i can find all the stupid little mistakes that you miss. Anyways,it's bloody brilliant,you stupid goth!
-millz

El~ Keep writing! this is an awesome fic! go, go, go, write, write, write! just like Sarah tells me to grow,grow, grow! (inside joke) :)

Hahaha, I love your writing! Its a gift! hm... maybe I should be more "exotic".. ;) actually the last time I let someone put eyeliner on me I did get my bloody eye poked out!

Brilliant, hunni!! I love it all the more with every chapter you write! This was really really good. You should do more POV's, you're good at them. It would be interestingt o know all hte others' thoughts.
I sent an email, by the way, to everyone I know on ff.net, saying to read your fic. I don't know whether you've had any more reviews or not, but I did ask! Aren't I nice?! :D
Update soon sweetie! *huggle*
Luvs Silva x X x X x