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Castles in the sky
2003-11-03
ch 1,
abuseOkay, I've just been browsing through your stories, as there is so many with talent shining out in them...

I liked this one. A poem that showed true feeling and compassion as if it was a real life story. It brings out the shame and torturous thoughts that go on inside Ken, with mixed emotions and tearful thoughts in between. Well written, and the layout of the text was brillant too.

I don't suppose you'd R&R a few of my stories please? I got a few PR and a few Beyblade fics, but not many. I'd love a bit more feedback on them. Well bye ye for now!
flower on thewind
2003-10-11
ch 1,
abuseep! gosh, you gave me the case of th WAFF (warm and fuzzy feelings)! Holy, smokes! it makes me wanna hug my sibling to death and never EVER let go. Gosh, good for you! You really know how to set the tone in words.
Kara
2003-10-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw! That's so sad and so cute. What a sweet poem. I think I am going to cry... WA!
Kat
2003-10-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat poem, I love Ken SO much but I should tell you...you have it posted in the beyblade section, other than that great job YAY KEN!!
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