Yay! Jake got EXACTLY what he deserved. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

that was a great story, i liked it so much i read it twice. i also liked the way emma and jesse got together aswell as brennan and shalimar they are definitely the best pairings eva.

very nice.

glad it ended happy

Top notch, but then again I love anything with Jesse and Emma. However, this is one of my favs as it's extrememly well written!

Good story.

I look forward toreading the rest of your fics

Wonderful, I love your fanfic; You really catch everybody character, I could imagine their gestures and what they say as it was one real chapter from the TV Show, moreover with they all being couples, and the perfect ones! I can't imagine B/E or J/S except like friends.
Beautiful J/E relationship, oh my god how I envy her :P and very real S/B one. Really, really congratulations, although my opinion comes just from a fan, not an expert, jejeje
MARTA

I really liked it. There could be more but good just the way it is

What a bummer to end the story! But i hope you will write more storys of them. You are a great writer and i love this story! Keep them comin. LOL

WOOHOO that was neat girl i look forward to another jesse/emma story from u i hope :-) it is sad that it was emma that died i love the show even if i only saw six episodes of it catch next time

So you're the creator of "A chance to talk" and "Conner's visit"? I should have known... No wonder I like them so much!
Thanks for a beautiful Fic, it's been a pleasure to read it and wait for updates.

Wow talk about a commupence (i can't spell) I liked it a lot! :D of course I always love the romance parts. I'm glad that you played a little bit into the fact that Emma is a lot more powerful then she lets on. The cat and mouse game was good, I liked that. Um very good job over all, it was understandable and esay to read unlike some others that i've read and I apprecaite that. :D

Nice Ending! I have loved every chapter of this one! I hope to read more soon from you:-)

An Awesome end to an Awesome story. Great job.

THANK YOU SO MUCH! Lol, thanks for adding another chapter! And I am glad, yes, that he got more...he deserves as much as anyone can give him...pure torture, plus torture as well. And I don't agree with anyone who doesn't see Bren/Shal together...they FIT PERFECTLY! lol. Great fic altogether, and I can't wait to read more of your work :)

! that was GREAT! b/s! :D j/e. :) suffering step dad! :D :D :D wOnDeRfUl! :D great punishment and great ending! hope to hear more from you soon! :D :D :D